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cuscus
Obsessive-Compulsive (I) Inmate

From: los angeles, california
Insane since: May 2000

posted posted 05-23-2000 22:30

i made this page for a client and it is nowhere near done but i wanted to get an intial review on it. the only thing i really worked on was the interfaces, so give me your opinion. i dont really like the page at all but whatever.
here it is: http://www.onairpro.com <P>,cuscus

Dan
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist

From: Calgary, Alberta, Canada
Insane since: Apr 2000

posted posted 05-23-2000 23:22

I like it, its easy to navigate, and has a friendly feel to it <P>I would of liked a curvey line more then the straight one though, on the remote mouseovers.<P>Very nicely done.<P> - Dan -

DocOzone
Maniac (V) Lord Mad Scientist
Sovereign of all the lands Ozone and just beyond that little green line over there...

From: Stockholm, Sweden
Insane since: Mar 1994

posted posted 05-23-2000 23:34

Hey, I wouldn't be so hard on yourself, "***" is a bit extreme for this one. I do agree about the lines pointing to the texts, the angled straight line wasn't super elegant, could've been done better. The splash page screen might have been better off as GIF, the jpeg artifacting was rather extreme. For the interior interface, the mouseover text on the left might have been overkill, in terms of space used on the screen, and also in bandwidth. I would have favored a smaller, tighter piece for the top, maybe with the title done as part of it. The text, well, that was just a bunch of text. Maybe some more elegant wrapper for it, a fancy table setup, or even some related rules to break it up, the page got super boring once you scrolled down, and you *needed* to scroll down to see the text on most systems. Not too bad overall, learn from your experiences and move on to the next, they'll all only get better!<P><IMG SRC="http://www.ozones.com/forum/siggie.gif" border=0>

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