Preserved Topic: My first eyeball. What do U think? |
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Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Hallenskog, Norway ;) |
posted 01-03-2003 22:15
This is the first eyeball that I've ever made, and I'm quite satisfied actually |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Norway |
posted 01-03-2003 22:18
It looked really tasteful.... I'm hungry... |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-03-2003 23:59
The iris is quite nice. |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: buttcrack of the midwest |
posted 01-04-2003 00:12 |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: NY, USA |
posted 01-04-2003 00:15
The whites of the eyes aren't completely white. DL's right. Take his advice, give it another shot, and post the result. Good start. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: there...no..there..... |
posted 01-04-2003 00:21
:FAQ: |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Oblivion |
posted 01-04-2003 00:38
If you're going for realism, I suggest you make veins around the eyeball as well. In any case, even if you follow Ben Stiens add and use eye cleaner, you're always gonna have some fleshy red. Heh. |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Norway |
posted 01-04-2003 11:10
Kine: Zlathar have seen your page before, he showed me... |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Hallenskog, Norway ;) |
posted 01-04-2003 12:59
Thanks for all the tips! I'll try to make it better! |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Hallenskog, Norway ;) |
posted 01-04-2003 13:33
Here's what I got... I've changed the color a bit, added a little blood ( ) and got rid of the black line around the iris... |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-04-2003 18:48
Definite inprovement =) |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Hallenskog, Norway ;) |
posted 01-04-2003 19:11
Thank's for the help DL!! I tried to fix the highlight on the iris, and I made the background transparent... |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Hallenskog, Norway ;) |
posted 01-04-2003 19:22
*YEACH!* IMO, it looked really bad with the transparent background, so I tried with a gray one... It's better than the transparent one, and it isn't white... so here goes: |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 |
posted 01-04-2003 20:43 |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-04-2003 20:58
The main reason it deosn't look so good transparent is that the dark background here nullifies the small amount of shading you have on the eye. |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Hallenskog, Norway ;) |
posted 01-04-2003 21:58
What about this one then? |
Bipolar (III) Inmate From: Calgary Alberta Canada |
posted 01-05-2003 05:29
Just a note Zlathar, Use the color #2b0404 as your matte. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Oblivion |
posted 01-05-2003 13:19
I just had to give another go at this, ever since DG's tut on eyes. |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Hallenskog, Norway ;) |
posted 01-05-2003 13:29
looks pretty nice |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Hallenskog, Norway ;) |
posted 01-05-2003 15:43
I tried to make some skin to my eye to, but... It didn't go to well |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: *land |
posted 01-05-2003 16:19
Looks like you used some textured brushes in there... and some really soft ones. |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Hallenskog, Norway ;) |
posted 01-05-2003 16:36
okey! will do! I'll try that and post what I come up with! |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-05-2003 18:44
Not bad work guys. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Oblivion |
posted 01-05-2003 19:20
Well I did some shaping up, on like, everything. Heh. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-05-2003 23:38
Once again, the shape of the eye is all off, unless you're staring into the mirror with your fingers holding your eye as wide open as possible... |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 |
posted 01-06-2003 00:27 |
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist From: KC, KS |
posted 01-06-2003 00:46
"Yo DL! I did it! I did it!" |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Oblivion |
posted 01-06-2003 02:14
I knew you'd join the scene sometime synax. |
Bipolar (III) Inmate From: Hooterville |
posted 01-06-2003 02:21
Wow?some really good eyes here! (synax: excellent!) |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-06-2003 02:28
Beautiful work Synax =) |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 |
posted 01-06-2003 03:07 |
Bipolar (III) Inmate From: Hooterville |
posted 01-06-2003 03:43
Bless your hearts! Wonderful work I see here. I have neglected this forum. (And I need to update my site, desperately! I have filled several sketchbooks and need to scan them and put them up!) |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 |
posted 01-06-2003 04:25 |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: out of a sleepy funk |
posted 01-06-2003 05:21
yeah! dumba$$! |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Oblivion |
posted 01-06-2003 05:54
Ah, glad to see you're still here bearsclover. Anyways I did some more shaping up. Probably all for today. |
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist From: KC, KS |
posted 01-06-2003 06:12
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Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: 1011000100 |
posted 01-06-2003 11:22
Is it me or is it fear? You can only see the whole iris when somebody is scared to dead, can't you? (That's why Synax's and Bearsclover's eyes are so nice. I love them.) |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: in media rea |
posted 01-06-2003 13:47
It's because insider is following (far too closely) a loose tutorial on roughing out an eye in PS. He missed the point, hence the recreation of an eyelid that is far too open for the circumference of the iris. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-06-2003 14:29 |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Hallenskog, Norway ;) |
posted 01-06-2003 16:20
Just a quick question... |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-06-2003 17:56
Just a mouse here. |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: *land |
posted 01-06-2003 19:05
Yes, I'm using a tablet. |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: *land |
posted 01-06-2003 19:39
oh... forgot to add a few things.... |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: Hallenskog, Norway ;) |
posted 01-06-2003 20:22
Great work synax! And Bearsclover too of course! |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-06-2003 21:09
Ok, looking better. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 |
posted 01-07-2003 00:00
I'd also like to add that it may be beneficial if you flesh out the rest of the features within your constrained area (ie, the bridge of the nose, cheek bone, forehead). This way, you'll get the whole feel of where things should be, and what's missing. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Oblivion |
posted 01-07-2003 01:51
Actually, I stopped following your tutorial DG, right when I had the basic layout of my eye. Just to let you know. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-07-2003 03:14 |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: |
posted 01-07-2003 15:54
eyes, ah yes the windows to the soul, some very beautiful souls we have here |
Bipolar (III) Inmate From: Norway |
posted 01-07-2003 21:14
I've never painted in Photoshop before, but I thought I'd give it a try anyway. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Oblivion |
posted 01-07-2003 21:49
Speaking of souls, I think I found my soul mate EzRa-D. Is it safe to say I love you? . |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: buttcrack of the midwest |
posted 01-08-2003 06:57
Just can`t resist an eye thread. I tried to hold back...but... |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 |
posted 01-08-2003 15:57 |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-08-2003 16:13 |
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist From: KC, KS |
posted 01-08-2003 16:58
The skin kind of looks like ceramic on that one DB but the rest is great! Lovin the eyelashes. |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: |
posted 01-08-2003 21:09
Well... that was a lot harder than it looks. I had problems trying to figure out skin tones/colours and even now my eye looks very flat. Also, the eyeball didn't go very well and I sort of gave up on it... for today at least. I'll give it another go tomorrow and see if I can make needed improvements. |
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate From: |
posted 01-09-2003 04:08
I like it! |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-09-2003 05:31
Synax - |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: buttcrack of the midwest |
posted 01-09-2003 06:18
Thanks synax. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-09-2003 06:38 |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: buttcrack of the midwest |
posted 01-09-2003 09:24
Gotcha. Thanks. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 |
posted 01-09-2003 13:43 |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-09-2003 14:33
(who?) |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: |
posted 01-09-2003 16:33 |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: there...no..there..... |
posted 01-09-2003 20:36
lovely work here. Bob, those eyelashes are just fantastic. I think that is what Synax is refering to. I'd love to know how you did those as well. |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: buttcrack of the midwest |
posted 01-09-2003 22:40
I cheat. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 |
posted 01-10-2003 03:09 |
Obsessive-Compulsive (I) Inmate From: |
posted 01-12-2003 23:52
kool |
Obsessive-Compulsive (I) Inmate From: |
posted 01-12-2003 23:59
kool |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: AČ, MI, USA |
posted 01-13-2003 02:10
Well, I've seen a few of these threads since I've been here, but this is the first time I've decided to give it a go. This is only my second painting (1st was my sig below), but don't be afraid to completely rip into me. I'd actually appreciate it if you did I'd like to gain a lot more skill with my mouse, instead of relying more on PS. |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: in media rea |
posted 01-13-2003 02:33
Lookie...a new Yannah. |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: buttcrack of the midwest |
posted 01-13-2003 05:26
In addition to what DG said, maybe try some more color variation in the iris. Also that flehsy-bump-thingy in the inner corner moves in to cover more of the ball, rather than just the red edge that you have now. Right below the bottom lid, you can see the roundness of the eyeball, as well. Remember it`s a complete ball, not just the part you can see. |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: AČ, MI, USA |
posted 01-13-2003 06:36
Bleh, I lost my post. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
posted 01-13-2003 18:11
Remember also that "that flehsy-bump-thingy in the inner corner" is actually 2 different things! |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: AČ, MI, USA |
posted 01-14-2003 00:12
Thanks everybody, for your input. I worked over a bit more (not much). I'm going to move onto a few other things, and leave this one unfinished for now. Thanks again for the help |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: buttcrack of the midwest |
posted 01-16-2003 01:29 |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers From: Cell 53, East Wing |
posted 01-16-2003 02:06
db: That is really great. Some thoughts though: |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 |
posted 01-16-2003 06:24 |