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That's a LOT of content, no doubt about it. I would seriously consider, somehow making the look abit more organized. As it is now, with the color scheme (white, with your blue-gray), there are huge areas of white - with your blue-grey text content (whith some graphics here and there, inbetween). As such, it is very difficult, to see where one content part ends, and the other begins, which rapidly leads to content overload. I would consider using color to seperate the areas, maybe occasionally using the blue-grey as background? here is an example, of how one website solved this [url=http://www.justice4pat.com/]Justice4Pat[/url]. Notice how color was used, to seperate content? The sides (left and right) suffer from this most - it is hard to discern a difference from them and the middle, where your main content is. The header - the main place on your website - is rather...bland. It also says nothing about the Lost city of Tinnos. What [b]is[/b] the Lost City of Tinnos? It also appears to be very empty...though maybe there will be more buttons/links for Nav there? If I have to ask that...then it needs to be better presented. The calender and the Chatbox I find to be in a nice place. I find the colors to be ok, nothing grating, etc, and they work harmoniously together. I think a bit better usage of them, would make the website much easier to read - at least, to seperate the content from one another. Text/font - looks nice, no problems with it (though TwItch^ might have something else to say about that...hehe.) However, I don't understand why you sporadically use black. It seems rather arbitrarily used... All in all, not a bad start...nothing major, in that sense other than the above. [url=http://faq.ozoneasylum.com/397/]WebShaman[/url] | [url=http://faq.ozoneasylum.com/924/]Asylum D & D[/url] | [url=http://www.nullinterrupt.de/dndmins]D & D Min Page[/url] [small](Edited by [internallink=925]WebShaman[/internallink] on 09-30-2004 15:11)[/small]
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