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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	I'm glad I read those posts, or I wouldn't have noticed the random headers. My initial reaction was soemthing along the lines of "ooh, very nice" The background image of the page combined with the red header that I saw gave a nice little sense of subtle drama. The rest of the page flows in a very nice, clean, smooth manner. Overall, it is very attractive. My biggest complaints: 1) without that red header, the others ar e a little....lackluster. that boldness of the first header I saw was a big part of what I felt made the page work. 2) once you go further down the page, where the header is no longer visible, all color disappears =( (excluding the 'code' block). I would love to see hints of the vibrant red brought down in to things like maybe the borders on teh <h4>'s, the attributions for the comments, or some sort of highlight on the list (whether a bullet, or a left border, or whatever) etc. Just little things, but enough to re-provide that little sense of drama that I first saw. and, to a lesser degree, 3) the page itself is awfully narrow. I can certainly understand liking it somewhat slim, but it feels a little too narrow for my tastes. I like what you've done with the 'image' 'link' 'code' and 'quote' indicators. The menu, though simple in appearance, is very attractive. All in all, very nice page. The lack of color in the main body of the page is a serious detraction, however, as are some of the headers. I would suggest (in addition to the suugestions on color above) reworking some of those headers so that despite having vastyl different subject matter, they retain a similar level of impact and balance. [url=http://in-dented.com/sigs.html][img]http://www.in-dented.com/sigs/knot_sig_32.gif[/img][/url] [small](Edited by [internallink=163]DL-44[/internallink] on 01-16-2005 17:53)[/small] Loading...
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