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from one old dad to another: welcome :) [b]COLORS:[/b] If that were anything other than a blown glass site, or perhaps a psychedlic 60's velvet black light poster site, I'd say yikes! on the colors. But I think it fits, though I'd still not be happy to be stuck reading yellow on black all day. Thankfull, the verbiage is light. [b]MARKUP:[/b] I'm a little confused by your doctype, html 4, your markup is near perfectly valid xhtml1 (you have a few closing slashes missing, some included, mixed bag). You've done well in most places making the markup semantically meaningful, tho the horizontal navigation could/should be a list if you're going to use UL for the other link lists in the site. [b]CSS:[/b] Pretty simple layout so not much to talk about (I like that aspect ;)). You could stand to use some shortcuts, for examples: [code] margin: 5px 5px 5px 5px; becomes margin: 5px; margin: 5px 15px 5px 15px; becomes margin: 5px 15px; font-family: verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; font-style: italic; becomes font : italic 12px verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif; [/code] Some of your structural div element IDs leave me scratching my head a little, those could be made more meaningful. [b]TEXT:[/b] The bold red serifed typeface you've chosen for some headlines is not readable in spots. goudy, caslon are also problably not a real good choice for prevelance, but you have covered your butt with decent backups behind them. Could use some attention to line-height and top/bottom padding on your paragraphs for the sake of readability. Overall you could stand to finesses the "white space" a little here and there but the aforementioned paragraph tweaks should go a long way toward that end. All and all a great first post, hope to see you around. [url=http://disk919.com/][img]http://www.disk919.com/sig/jason.gif[/img][/url][url=http://serveit.org/][img]http://www.disk919.com/sig/serveit.org.gif[/img][/url]
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