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Jaron Rovensky's new web site - folk rock and blues
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Overall I like it but from a 'user' pov... a few issues. I'd like some bottom of page navigation. On the 'biography' page the 'Top of page' goes to 'Protected Area' Login etc. Not the top. On the 'music' page. Presumably, two of the songs are wrongly named/labelled. I downloaded 'Stagger Lee' which in fact is 'You can't always get what you want.' So you might want to check the rest. On the 'bio' page. Replace all instances of 'weather' with "whether" unless he's actually referring to Alberta's climate which Tom Waits would concede can be, 'Colder than a well-diggers ass.' =) 'Your' link 'vitaleffect.' Should that not open in a separate window? Just my preference but I think you should leave the clients site. And to be a bit picky on your site. "We build incredibly easy to use...." Wrong use of 'incredible/y.' What's the opposite of something being 'credible?' Well it's 'incredible' isn't it. Most people use 'incredible' when what they really mean is 'Astonishing.' So in your case it would be "We build 'astonishingly easy to use...." but that perhaps doesn't read as well as it could so... consider 'very' in bold italics. But please get rid of 'incredibly.' Picky picky picky yes...but it just irks me. =) Let me know when the tunes are renamed. And yes... I quite like him.
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