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[quote] [b]kazroot said:[/b] Or there's nothing more left to say 'bout it than I already did for myself ... [/quote] nah...people are just busy. I check stuff here rarely anymore. At any rate: 1. Yes the navigation is hard to spot at first. maybe just a different color for the menu stuff. Grey on grey is hard to see. Also, maybe space the menu items out a bit more. Home and Artwork bump up against each other 2. Don't mess with my cursor! I like the pointing arrow :) 3. First page (home) Not much to say there. Just tells me it's an online portfolio. That's fine. The tribal symbol thing in the middle doesn't really go with the Oriental style font you got for your name. kazroot sound oriental to me and the font kind of looks it too. Moving on to artwork.... 4. looks like it is a subdomain? OK. But how do I get to other pages from here? 5. Not sure what the deal is but some of the images cover up the title of the site and the background does not expand if the image is large than it lengthwise. Looks kind of bad. 6. I see that you have some tables in there. Not sure why, but you could do this kind of site pretty easily using all CSS. I really dig some of the art. Pretty cool stuff. Since that is the main focus on the site, I would really work on presenting that better. A slide show is fine for somethings but with something like this, I think you need more. Title of the piece, what medium you used, what are some the techniques maybe, some of the inspiration of why you did it. Not sure but just some images for an online portfolio just kind of misses the point IMHO. OK...hope that helped *some* at least Later, C:\ [img]http://www.danasoft.com/sig/cprompt.jpg[/img]
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