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mas
Maniac (V) Mad Librarian

From: the space between us
Insane since: Sep 2002

IP logged posted posted 09-16-2005 18:52 Edit Quote

i just finished a new design for my personal website. comments, feedbacks, critics are welcome
(i know its far away from perfect, but i need to now the hard mistakes at least )

JKMabry
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: raht cheah
Insane since: Aug 2000

IP logged posted posted 09-16-2005 20:31 Edit Quote

I find the mix of vector edged stuff and softedged bitmappy bits distracting. It's pretty busy overall and the mix of elements aren't makin *me* happy!

Those birds man. Oh gosh. Gotta get rid of those birds

I assume graphic design is about all we can comment on since yer markup's usually sold innit? Well there you have my quick driveby.

Good to see yet another version tho, you're tireless!

reisio
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Florida
Insane since: Mar 2005

IP logged posted posted 09-16-2005 23:39 Edit Quote

sun + boobie = good

GRUMBLE
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist

From: Omicron Persei 8
Insane since: Oct 2000

IP logged posted posted 09-17-2005 15:56 Edit Quote

it would be cool if the horizontal offset of the main box changes with the width of the browser window.
just make it a %-value.
also the haird of the lady in the middle is a bit jaggy. just erase the very thin hair which floats around there.

other than that, nice.

edit: oh and i dont like the black border of the sun. every thing else in your design does not have border and now the one thing that also shouldnt have a border in reality has one.



(Edited by GRUMBLE on 09-17-2005 15:58)



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