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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	My first impression is that the site is dreadfully boring. I realize, of course, that the intent is to keep it clean, keep it focused on the content. But you can do this and still visual interest - in this case the only visual interest is given by the navigation. There is nothing to draw the eye down to the content. So really, by trying to focus on the content, you've actually ignored it ;) Things I would play around with - 1) creative use of background image in the body (content area) of the page ( a single, faded, no-repeat image stuck in a page can make such a great impression...) 2) varied border stylings (a 2em thick light grey border down the left edge of that box instead of a 1px black one, for example...). 3) get some color into that text! Get text in there with a proper heirarchy, lists, etc so that you can play around with the presentation. work on whitespace too. you've got a lot of it on the outside, but your text is bunched right up on the inside. space things out, get some balance in there. I did take a quick look when you first posted, and I must say - although I didn't care for that font all that much, this one is, IMO, significantly less attracitve. It looks what you'd see on a high-school sports banner. I think perhaps your girlfriend got you too focused on the 'masculine' part of it ;) I don't think you need to worry about having a resume that is going to mainly push computer related experience/education come across as overly masculine. Maybe if you were trying to join the wrestling team, or become a roughneck... I think this site can be worked into something nice, but I do think it needs work to get there. FWIW [url=http://in-dented.com/sigs.html][img]http://in-dented.com/sigs/knot_sig_32.gif[/img][/url] [small](Edited by [url=http://www.ozoneasylum.com/user/163]DL-44[/url] on 04-29-2006 12:46)[/small] Loading...
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