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Yes, great improvement! Next step would be: work on whitespace. You've got a lot of it, but your content text is cramped. Add larger padding to the inside of that box, or larger margins to <p>'s within it. Play with your border a bit - thicker would definitely work well here (vary the thickness too...) I would also still recommend adding a background inside the content, making it appear as though it is translucent over the page background (it needs to be *very* faint, but would be a nice touch IMO). Also, important to note: since reading Blaise's response, the different perspectives suggested by the 'technology' and 'experience' icons is really perturbing me... And getting picky about placement - I would really like to see the main header (DanCurran) over to the left about another 50-100 pixels. Would help with the overall flow I think. [url=http://in-dented.com/sigs.html][img]http://in-dented.com/sigs/knot_sig_32.gif[/img][/url]
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