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Not much to add, but one of the first thing that jumped out was the bevel on the menu bar. It looks, well, cheap -- like someone though "I don't know what to do with this part, ay, this filter will do". Have a think about why you want the menu to stand out (maybe just a plain purple background would work better), what parts of it should stand out and why (highlight the whole bar, of just the menu options), and then find a way to make it stand out without it being too obvious that you've just wacked some filter on it. In simpler terms, make it look like it belongs there as opposed to looking like an afterthought -- the same goes for the "contact us" bit, just looks too out-of-place to me. Futhermore, you're using different heading fonts and odd sizes, one for the header image, another for the quite and another really huge one for the content title. With such a plain and simple site I really think this is too much and it creates visual confusion as it doesn't convey any kind of order to guide the user about your page. It's a nice start thought. :) [url=http://dracusis.deviantart.com/] [img]http://www.whatever.net.au/~cameron/files/images/ozone/ArtDecoSiggy.gif[/img] [/url]
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