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Saboter: Welcome. Perhaps the comments so far have been a little harsh but I think you get the point: 1. Splash pages do have their uses but they are massively overused and yours isn't really necessary. 2. Its an interesting idea for an interface but it has all been done before and somehow you manage to make such a clean bright colour as orange rather dingey. Some other thoughts: 3. Fill in those TITLE tags - they are very important and gives a poor impression if they are left empty. 4. Your page is just slightly too wide for 800x600. Actually I'll stop there for the time being (esp. as this is the third time I've attempted this review!!). I'm not sure what you are going to do with this site so different comments will apply. What I'd quite like to see is you expand on that splash page theme and work that into actual page design - its an interesting look and it could give you something interesting and distinctive (with a few tries and visits back here!!). Its a good start and you've got some ideas about where you want to take things so keep experimenting and we'll let you know what we think. hooray for humans: I think in fact that Saboter makes wooden shoes: [url=http://www.dictionary.com/cgi-bin/dict.pl?term=sabot]www.dictionary.com/cgi-bin/dict.pl?term=sabot[/url] Emps [img]http://www.miscminutiae.com/sig/emps_oz_sig.gif[/img] [b]Beware the foreparts of a woman, the hindparts of a mule, and all sides of a priest[/b] - English proverb
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