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bluecorr: It certainly is a good looking site and those big graphics download quickly. CPrompt has hit on a number of good points but here are my thoughts: 1. I can't see the point of the splash page. 2. You have the keywords metatag but no description on your splash page (or on your frameset or on the internal pages). 3. I don't like frames and the only reason I can see for you using them is to stop the scrolling on the page which I don't think is a good enough reason!! 4. If I hadn't read CPrompt's post I might have missed those scroller arrows!! I'd also like an idea of where the scroll is up to. 5. On 800x600 the actual content is relegated to a pretty small piece of screen real estate and I think you benefit from making that a more important part of the page. I'd think about making it a semi-transparent scrolling layer over the rest of your page graphic. 6. Just curious but is that a picture of you on the page? Its nicely done. 7. You've made a good use of CSS and on the internal pages (bio, etc.) I can't see any reason for you use of tables - you'd have simpler code if you used DIVs. Nice work (and a good portfolio) and although I like the look I think the implementation (frames) could be done differently (but its your site!!). Well done. Emps [img]http://www.miscminutiae.com/sig/emps_oz_sig.gif[/img] [b]Beware the foreparts of a woman, the hindparts of a mule, and all sides of a priest[/b] - English proverb
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