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the PHOTO is BAD. :) there, i got it out. now look at it, max - there's a shadow behind him, and to HIS right. which means that the light comes from in front of him, on his left. (hold up your right hand, the light is coming from that rough direction) right? well.... the entire left side of his face is in the shade, meaning that the light is coming from his right, almost at a right angle. (put your left hand on the left side of the monitor, the light is coming from that rough direction) something is wrong here..... :) people have already voiced their opinions about the colour on the top bar - and i echo them. try using one of the other colours in the site - like the orange in "ENHANCED". perhaps. other things: - i realise that you don't want to be conventional, but it took me a while to figure out exactly what company this site is. i automatically look in the top left, then top right corners, and that didn't really help. - is the phone number important? if so, you may want it to be on the screen without scrolling in 1024x768. it looks like the site is 'complete' without scrolling in this res... so i really wouldn't be tempted to move it if i wasn't reviewing. in fact, that also means that i miss your 'corporate grey/blue-ish' patch too. - are the menu options going to blur onmouseover when they actually work? because, imho, the link should look [b]inviting[/b] onmouseover, so that the person is encouraged to click. do i make sense?? some links even give extra details when you mouseover, like "a list of all our products and prices" when you go over a 'products' link - yours give less information when you mouseover them - another 'my opinion' thing... that "order now!" button seems to cheapen the site no end. the rest of it looks really classy and stylish, all very cool, and that jsut makes it look like an infomercial... like something is wrong, because it really should be flashing. i reckon it would still get sufficient eye attention if it was the same as the other options - the fact that it is on the end will alone give it extra focus. okay, the faults are picked - time to say: max, i love it! the graphics are really crisp and fresh, most of the colours work, and the black and white pictures really make it stylish. good work! ___________________ b u n c h a p i x e l s
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