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clevergeek: Welcome (again). It is interesting that you say you are colour blind as it is something we should all bear in mind but often do. A few quick thoughts and I'll drop some more in as I come up with them. So on the colour front I think the use of that white colour for the main text distracts from everything else. I like that graphic of he band and perhaps that is a theme you wan to carry over into the text. That dark blue is either just a little too dark or the size is too small - I might be tempted to try and grab the off white of the singers face and arms and use something like that as your main text colour and keep the blue red for graphics and highlights. ZOX is one of our colour experts and might want to drop in an opinion on this. I'm not sure about how tricky the colours are for you but if you want I'd be happy to suggest a few if you want. ZOX's site is a great place to go too: [url=http://www.webwhirlers.com/colors]www.webwhirlers.com/colors[/url] For vertical spacing (depending on where it is being used, can be had using margins or padding - see briggl's tutorials in the GN - one is up for approval so you'll need to go via the forum). You could also use CSS to get rid of things like the nested italic and bold tags I saw. Some of your SSIs are showing: [quote] <!-- <!?#include virtual="/dir/ document2.html" ?> --> [/quote] check out the GN tutorial on this. I'm not sure there is any need for the nocss notice as you are still using tables for your layout and this is designed for older browsers where this may break (more advice on this if you want). You have an awful lot of metatags but not the two most important ones (keyword and description). Overall its a good start - the colours do need some work and I'm sure we are ready to help out there if you want. There are also a few tweaks that could improve the code and you don't need that many tables even if you are going to go for a table based layout. Emps
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