Topic: Comments, bug reports, typos (Page 1 of 1)

I'm about ready with a site redesign at http://interiormotiveslv.com/testsite/
any comments are appreciated.

Me Again?

INDEX PAGE:
(trend- setting) there is an extra space in there.

The paragraph over at the left could use some spacing. Like after "homeowner". That next sentence is a little long but it works.

That border around the bathroom picture isn't quite working for me. I would switch around the sections. You have the first column with a picture of the product and a paragraph and then the menu and logo in the second column. Seems kind of weird.

ABOUT PAGE:
You may want to indent the first sentence of your paragraphs.
Architectural is spelled wrong. <--this is right
Should "Allied" be capitalized?

SERVICES:
I believe that "floorcovering" is two words.
I would make the first lines at least bold.
If you are going to do this an outline, remember that it is Roman numerals and then lower case alphabet:

I. Blah
a. blah
b. blah
II. Blah

It seems kind of jumbled on this page.

PORTFOLIO:
I am getting a blue border around the right "MORE" button and not the left one. One or the other. I prefer no border. It looks silly with the border.
You may want to change that to "BACK" and "FORWARD".

TESTIMONIALS:
Kind of jumbled on this page like the "Services" page. I think that you can organize this page a little better. Check out some magazines and how they do the "headline" or "featured text" kind of thing. Like they take one sentence that really stands out and highlights it. Know what I mean?
Each paragraph just runs together. You have a "headline" text then the comment then the peoples name and city. But it is all running togther right now.

quote:

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Just what we wanted
Alice has an excellent understanding of construction, which was a very important quality when selecting the best materials for specific locations in our home. Her ability to put carpet, wallpaper, tile, and wall colors together to present an elegant look is one of her finest design qualities. What a delight to have a designer who worked carefully with us to achieve the precise ambiance we wanted for our new home.
Mr. and Mrs. Jed Olsen Las Vegas, NV

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isn't that you ???

CONTACT:

May want to move the line with "State" and "Zip" over so that all the text and input boxes line up.

Well, that's about it. On the entire site I would do something more with the text. It is kind of LARGE right now and it just jumps out at you. Kind of hits you right in the head actually.

Cool?


Later,
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[This message has been edited by CPrompt (edited 02-24-2002).]

wow those sure are some tacky-ass interior designs they've got going on there.

Thanks C:/
Fixed the typo's and the border on the portfolio page. I think I'll tweek the style sheet a little to add spacing and indents to some of the text pages, font size is a bit tricky as I'm doing this on a mac and the fonts all look smaller to me. Can you suggest a good font size for the pc?

I think the SERVICES page will be replaced with something a little more reader friendly, I hope. If not, can I control the look of the ol with a style sheet?

I'll have to think about the testimonials a little, I'm not quite sure what to do different there. (yea, that's me in there. We do some trade from time to time) I think I can talk her out of the picture border on the home page, one employee there is hooked on it, but everyone else thinks it's unnecessary, I need to tone it down a little at least.

Me Again?

As far as fonts go. I pretty much use the same size and font-family for the "main text"

(font:10pt, Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif

Then you can adjust the size and boldness for the header stuff.

Later,
C:\


~Binary is best~