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Rauthrin
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: 2 Miles Below Insane
Insane since: Apr 2003

posted posted 12-02-2003 05:00

Testing.. I know that it needs a bit of work though...



AWP from Counter-Strike

mahjqa
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: The Demented Side of the Fence
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 12-02-2003 11:48

Suho1004
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Seoul, Korea
Insane since: Apr 2002

posted posted 12-02-2003 11:58

Shading aside, the kick is very awkward...


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mahjqa
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: The Demented Side of the Fence
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 12-02-2003 12:12

For the kickback you don't need much. What I found to work best is that leaving the motion upward out improves the realism, as the human eye compensates for that. also, the kickback is quite exagerrated in your animation.

Lacuna
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: the Asylum ghetto
Insane since: Oct 2002

posted posted 12-02-2003 12:36

i hafta agree with the kick thing... it's WAY too much. for that type of gun it would be more of a backwards motion rather than an up motion...and just a split second. also... the trailer for the bullet starts behind the barrel...and when it kicks up... you can see it. it should start well after the barrel.



Hugh
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Dublin, Ireland
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 12-03-2003 11:45

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Lol, angelfire.com isnt allowed here in College for some reason ?? .... so I can't see your sig, would like to as I play CS myself, hate the AWP tho (in the game)..

ozphactor
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: California
Insane since: Jul 2003

posted posted 12-04-2003 07:37

Yep, definitely tone down the vertical motion. Your name also looks odd floating out all alone to the right... maybe move it beneath the gun or something? Ooh, and maybe a few more shades of orange to give it just a touch of depth, eh?

Taobaybee
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: The Pool Of Life
Insane since: Feb 2003

posted posted 12-05-2003 18:31

^Ditto^ with another thought...AS your name is way out there on the right. Why not try to incorporate it a bit more by having the bullet "tear" through the name. either cutting it in half or leaving a hole?

Ruku
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Darkside of the Moon
Insane since: Aug 2003

posted posted 12-15-2003 02:06

That looks suspiciously like the sniper rifle from HALO.

Interesting concept. Maybe add a little trigger motion in there?

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Nemesis
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate

From: Uranus
Insane since: Aug 2003

posted posted 12-21-2003 01:55

The kick is perfectly fine if you draw a schoolyard in the background......

Otherwise with a little tweaking of the "kick", adjusting the bullet motion a little bit, and possibly adding trigger movement, in my humble opinion... I like it.

Jason

Xel
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Trumansburg, NY, USA
Insane since: Nov 2002

posted posted 12-22-2003 02:22

You could make the kick a bit less awkward also by making it rapid-fire, and have the bullets spell out the name.

-Xel

Ruku
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Darkside of the Moon
Insane since: Aug 2003

posted posted 12-25-2003 04:12

That'd have to be firing pretty fast Xel.

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