Preserved Topic: my poetry section? (Page 1 of 1)

any literates care to respond? would appreciate the feedback... <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/smile.gif">
http://www.worldzone.net/ss/vogonpoet/pages/words2/word.htm

interesting layout

Wery nice

nice, but kind of un-inspired layout for poetry...then again, the starkness of it might lend more credance to your work.. dunno

i don't know how to read... =(

lol@Mikey... I'll have to send you a copy of hooked on phonics!

thanks for the comments guys....

I was trying to go with a neutral tyoe of layout in order not to distract from the poems..

cheers

~Vp~

very interesting layout vogonpoet ... the poetry's not that bad either ...

*whispers to Jestah* don't tell anyone else, but actually... it was a critique of the poetry I was looking for !!!... lol... and thanks!

I didnt want to get flash with the layout cos I was aiming for an 'in your face' with the words.....

thanks for looking mate!

~Vp~

I don't geddit Vogon. What you've written is good stuff I'd guess (knot that I'd know)....But why no Vogon Poetry..genuine article variety?

I like the layout..but I don't think that I understand those poems.

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hehe, that was my comment on the poetry <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/wink.gif">
no offense....

[This message has been edited by DL-44 (edited 26-09-2000).]

ahhh good question Weadah... the nickname 'vogonpoet' is supposed to be ironic.. universes worst poetry!...

and no offense is ever taken... like graphics, poetry is subjective too!

cheers

~Vp~

yeas i looked as well i like to write Vogon myself ... id like to see more ....


i wrote a poem, once
.. and it got wet..
...and bled to death...

www.geocities.com/melstudios/imagist.htm

heyo Vogon heres some poems from like a year ago - a mixing of stuff - sorry bout bout the crappy take forever graphics wut do you thinks..

Kryptonic-

pretty cool Kryton!... I liked the way you layed out your poems... pretty dark poetry too... I tried checking out your melstudios URL but it looks like your still working on it?... post it when you get it running...

later

~Vp~