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Zigot_Bahn
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Canada
Insane since: Feb 2004

posted posted 04-16-2004 20:02

There some artwork by me tell me what you think?


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WarMage
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Rochester, New York, USA
Insane since: May 2000

posted posted 04-16-2004 20:18

Spelling! Spelling! In all of the language classes I have ever taken spelling was a key element, you misspell a work and you lose full credit. It made us realize there is a big difference between works like "form" and "from" the former is a noun which means shape and structure, while the later is a preposition used to indicate a specific place. You want to use "from" which would indicate the the art produced by you.

Also I have move this post to its correct forum, because artistic discussions should be dealt with in their respective forum. I felt that photoshop would be the closes thing, to what might suit your needs.

As for your work of art. You might think about using a specific vanishing point. Start out by placing your vanishing point and then making all of your lines strait and moving towards the vanishing point. I have placed what I think an approximation of where your vanishing point would be and some lines that you would follow when making the vanishing point on top of your image.



Once you have made your lines strait come back repost your image and I will give you further review.

WarMage
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Rochester, New York, USA
Insane since: May 2000

posted posted 04-16-2004 21:03

I also made a little example.



DL-44
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: under the bed
Insane since: Feb 2000

posted posted 04-16-2004 21:17

If you want any sort of critique, you will need to do a whole lot more than this.

This is the equivalent of scribbling a couple notes on a paper and asking for a critique of your "essay".

Skaarjj
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: :morF
Insane since: May 2000

posted posted 04-18-2004 12:52

Art Form You...uhh...ok!

You are...an impressionist oil painting!

Huzzah!

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Arthurio
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Rapla, Estonia
Insane since: Jul 2003

posted posted 04-18-2004 14:51

no intention to insult anyone but i think this thread should be deleted for being too lame
this is not artwork ... this is a piece of $hit drawn by a six year old

WarMage
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Rochester, New York, USA
Insane since: May 2000

posted posted 04-18-2004 16:01

Please be kind. This sort of comment is not needed. We especially don't need to delete a thread based on an opinion. This thread has a number of redeming values. The first is a sketch, the second is a slight discussion on perspective by your truely followed by an example. The third is further constructive critism by DL and then to tack on even more value we have moderate humar by Skaarjj. I don't think you could ask for much more out of a thread, and I personally think we need more threads like this.

Tyberius Prime
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Germany
Insane since: Sep 2001

posted posted 04-18-2004 16:27

indeed. I like what you have made out of it. Once zigot has grasped this concept, we might see if we can pull out doc's 'more than one vanishing point' images...

counterfeitbacon
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Vancouver, WA
Insane since: Apr 2002

posted posted 04-18-2004 19:59

http://www.sanford-artedventures.com/teach/lp_1pointperspect_proc.html

I thought this one was pretty good, from a Google.

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At0mic_PC
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Columbia MS USA
Insane since: Apr 2001

posted posted 04-18-2004 20:00

I kind of take offense to that Arthurio. I have a 5 year old son that draws. It is all art. It is what the person who holds the pen sees.

Zigot needs to work on his perspective. http://www.geocities.com/~jlhagan/K9-14/introduction.htm Try this site to help on perspective.


The secret of life is honesty and fair dealing. If you can fake that, you've got it made. --Groucho Marx

Skaarjj
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: :morF
Insane since: May 2000

posted posted 04-20-2004 08:07

I always find it ironic when someone says 'no offense' before they say something that they know is going to offend. If you don't want to cause offense, then don't say anything offensive.

Justice 4 Pat Richard

poi
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: France
Insane since: Jun 2002

posted posted 04-20-2004 11:43

No offense, but it seems that Zigot_Bahn absolutely don't care about what we think of his "art form". At least the insights given here could be useful to somebody else ... who knows. And to ruin the irony of my "no offense" statement, I'd say that I know for sure that a 7yo child is able to draw ( in fact, to figure the coordinates alone and code a little program to draw the lines ) something in Cavalier projection correctly. So seeing someone who went to university do some errors in a one vanishing point perspective scares me out.

synax
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Cell 666
Insane since: Mar 2002

posted posted 04-20-2004 14:17

Don't look at this thread in terms of what ZB has to offer us, because he's made it clear, time and time again that he has about as much to offer as a dead mole.

Instead, just take this thread for what it is - a primer in perspective. Should you want to learn more about perspective, check the FAQ. If you want to contribute, no one will stop you.

The point is, inmates need to stop focusing on ZB's constant idiocies and start focusing more on what this place is about.

"Nothin' like a pro-stabbin' from a pro." -Weadah

(Edited by synax on 04-20-2004 05:19)

Suho1004
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Seoul, Korea
Insane since: Apr 2002

posted posted 04-20-2004 15:47

^Preach it, brother!

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