Topic: Opinon's Plz Pages that link to <a href="https://ozoneasylum.com/backlink?for=10123" title="Pages that link to Topic: Opinon&amp;#039;s Plz" rel="nofollow" >Topic: Opinon&#039;s Plz\

 
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Trigger
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jun 2002

IP logged posted posted 06-20-2002 19:04 Edit Quote

http://www.themidnightsky.com/diary/

Slime
Lunatic (VI) Mad Scientist

From: Massachusetts, USA
Insane since: Mar 2000

IP logged posted posted 06-20-2002 19:19 Edit Quote

First, real quick impression: "personell" should be "personal."

Trigger
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jun 2002

IP logged posted posted 06-20-2002 21:32 Edit Quote

ok I understand *pulls out spell checker*
any other opinon's?
They'd be greatly appreciated

WarMage
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Rochester, New York, USA
Insane since: May 2000

IP logged posted posted 06-20-2002 22:24 Edit Quote

"Unknown" doesn't match the background. You might want to do something with that.

The colans ":" after your links just shouldn't be there. It doesn't work like you prolly wanted it to. You might try putting a space in there, but my gut feeling is to drop them completely. I would also want some more horrizontal space in there. It looks really crampt. More Margins? Make the lettering bigger? make some extra spacing? work with images? I am not really sure what exactly you could do there, but I would play with it a little more.

You also need some pazazz. Try some image work in there. Seeing as its a personal site, maybe a picture of something you're interested in, or even work in a picture of yourself.

It needs just a little more.



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