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RammStein
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: cEll 513, west wing of the ninth plain
Insane since: Dec 2000

IP logged posted posted 09-09-2002 21:14 Edit Quote

Even though I'm trying to get away from the computer due to my RT troubles .. I can't because of my line of work .. client has already said they like it and they want to go with this layout .. I'd thought I'd still share and see what you all think
http://www.dangerousdust.com

it's a book this doctor is selling about how virus's and disease has come to the human race .. etc etc .. to say the lest this doctor is rather weird .. I picked skulls for the layout just because in the book she includes many skulls and other examples of human and animals share diseases because of some sex thing .. because they have sex together or something rather .. to say the lest this doctor is very interesting

I did notice a few grainy area's I'll be working on them .. but what do some of you think


.::. cEll .::. 513

Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

IP logged posted posted 09-09-2002 22:00 Edit Quote

RammStein: RT? Anyway I think the site looks good and those colours work well but you need to set the heights on those images. It completely screws the layout until the images actually load and did leave me wondering if the page was broken

Not much more to comment on apart from use metatags and more use of styles oh and fill in that title tag The lighting on the skulls is a little garish and might be better toned down as well to bring the focus back on the middle area.

Also shouldn't the 'buy now' link go somewhere like Amazon?

Overall it looks good - good work

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Emps

FAQs: Emperor

Suho1004
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Seoul, Korea
Insane since: Apr 2002

IP logged posted posted 09-10-2002 03:31 Edit Quote

RT = Retinal Tickling?
Receiving Therapy?
Royal Trickery?
Rectal Torture? (ouch!)
Riddling Townspeople?
Red Toffee?
Random Testing?
Real Time? Ah... that's it, isn't it? Real time? Man, look at what I had to go through to figure that out!

I agree with what Emps said above, but just wanted to add a point of my own. Have you considered lining up the skull halves? I understand that you probably did it this way for balance, but it looks a little odd in my eyes. Just a thought, take or it leave it.




Cell 270

Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

IP logged posted posted 09-10-2002 11:58 Edit Quote

Suho1004: Thanks for that I'd got to Rectal T...... and decided to stop my speculation

I quite like the top of the skull and the jaw being separate like that - they'll never line up though as the top is human and the bottom is an animal (dog or something?) and I think it would be a bit odd.

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Emps

FAQs: Emperor

RammStein
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: cEll 513, west wing of the ninth plain
Insane since: Dec 2000

IP logged posted posted 09-10-2002 16:25 Edit Quote

thanks guys for the feedback .. and yes RT is Real Time ..

as for the skulls .. they are seperated on purpose because of the contrast and the dynamic look I was going for .. and well the client likes it like that too

Emp .. it's a human skull and a monkey skull .. and the links aren't live yet because we just got the thumbs up from the client


.::. cEll .::. 513



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