Topic: Dangerous Dust (Page 1 of 1)

Even though I'm trying to get away from the computer due to my RT troubles .. I can't because of my line of work .. client has already said they like it and they want to go with this layout .. I'd thought I'd still share and see what you all think
http://www.dangerousdust.com

it's a book this doctor is selling about how virus's and disease has come to the human race .. etc etc .. to say the lest this doctor is rather weird .. I picked skulls for the layout just because in the book she includes many skulls and other examples of human and animals share diseases because of some sex thing .. because they have sex together or something rather .. to say the lest this doctor is very interesting

I did notice a few grainy area's I'll be working on them .. but what do some of you think


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RammStein: RT? Anyway I think the site looks good and those colours work well but you need to set the heights on those images. It completely screws the layout until the images actually load and did leave me wondering if the page was broken

Not much more to comment on apart from use metatags and more use of styles oh and fill in that title tag The lighting on the skulls is a little garish and might be better toned down as well to bring the focus back on the middle area.

Also shouldn't the 'buy now' link go somewhere like Amazon?

Overall it looks good - good work

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FAQs: Emperor

RT = Retinal Tickling?
Receiving Therapy?
Royal Trickery?
Rectal Torture? (ouch!)
Riddling Townspeople?
Red Toffee?
Random Testing?
Real Time? Ah... that's it, isn't it? Real time? Man, look at what I had to go through to figure that out!

I agree with what Emps said above, but just wanted to add a point of my own. Have you considered lining up the skull halves? I understand that you probably did it this way for balance, but it looks a little odd in my eyes. Just a thought, take or it leave it.




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Suho1004: Thanks for that I'd got to Rectal T...... and decided to stop my speculation

I quite like the top of the skull and the jaw being separate like that - they'll never line up though as the top is human and the bottom is an animal (dog or something?) and I think it would be a bit odd.

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FAQs: Emperor

thanks guys for the feedback .. and yes RT is Real Time ..

as for the skulls .. they are seperated on purpose because of the contrast and the dynamic look I was going for .. and well the client likes it like that too

Emp .. it's a human skull and a monkey skull .. and the links aren't live yet because we just got the thumbs up from the client


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