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RammStein
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: cEll 513, west wing of the ninth plain
Insane since: Dec 2000

IP logged posted posted 09-10-2002 19:49 Edit Quote

another .. I'm spitting them out like there is no tomorrow
http://www.fidelitytransfer.com/index.htm

comment or not .. I'm actually very pleased with this layout .. keep in mind his is just a temporary look for the client .. there are no live links .. but I think you all can get the point


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Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

IP logged posted posted 09-10-2002 20:08 Edit Quote

RS: Another nice design. Some comments:

1. No metatags.

2. No DOCTYPE.

3. FONT tags Use more tags in general.

4. I can't see any point in that Flash movie. Better than using it on a splash screen but a waste of valuable front page real estate.

5. Use all lower or upper case a mix doesn't look great (I'd go with lower case and keep things future compatible).

6. the odd typo like "Don'w".

7. Your curves need aliasing.

8. I'm not convinced by the nav bar. What I might do is separate the navigation from the contact link with a curve across the bar.

Overall it looks good and it I like the use of colours and the balance of the page - although that is quite a few comments they are fairly minor and a few tweaks should sort them out. Good stuff again.

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RammStein
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: cEll 513, west wing of the ninth plain
Insane since: Dec 2000

IP logged posted posted 09-10-2002 20:17 Edit Quote

Emp .. I just noticed a few things .. I spit this out in two hrs and I didn't even complete the menu bar .. and on my comp screen those curves don't look like that .. so I'll have to straighten them out a little

as for the flash .. well they want it and I don't do flash my other designer did it .. though again we have no content from them so we couldn't make the flash into something that explains what they offer

but I will agree with you .. flash is such a waste of space .. but if the client wants to pay for it .. who am I to complain .. LOL

oh and Emp .. you didn't notice on the left side .. the border there are two spaces .. it looks like about 3 or 4 pixels seperated from each other .. hehe .. I didn't do that .. the other designer must of screwed something up

oh and the meta tags .. hey man .. this is just a temp .. LOL


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Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

IP logged posted posted 09-10-2002 20:39 Edit Quote

RS:

quote:
but if the client wants to pay for it .. who am I to complain .



Quite

I had seen that on the right but assumed it was my browser playing up - I must learn to trust Internet Explorer (hmm I think it is sending me subliminal messages).

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