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Your Text: Insert Slimies » Insert UBB Code » Close Last Tag \| All Tags UBB Help	Yup, it definitely breaks at 1024x768... You definitely need to get away from the frames... I've also got to agree with NoJive concerning your likes and dislikes: they are just unprofessional. Especially the dislikes. Yes, you may be 16, but I would think you'd want to project a more mature and professional image. It's up to you, of course. Also, I've got to admit that I'm kind of confused about the main page... this is a site to promote your design, right? If so, why is the main page essentially a journal (blog, whatever you want to call it)? The tone isn't all that professional, either... [quote][:: bling bling baby!!::]-10-15-02 posted by: Allen OOOOOOOHHHHHHH MAN!!!!!! i got some dope shit put in the portfolio and man its lookin good i also did my first php script on one of my clients sites incomputers.net yea so thats it uh-son uh-son that jacket is tite nah imean?[/quote] Now, don't get me wrong. You have the right to put whatever you want on your web page. But if the site's main purpose is to showcase your design and (hopefully) attract business, you might want to leave the "bling bling baby" etc. for a separate, personal page. What I really think you need to do is sit down and think about what exactly you want this page to be--and remember that it can't be [b]both[/b] a personal and a business site. I would recommend two sites: one for your design, and another one where you can just let loose and say whatever you want to say. I also have to comment on your "services" page. You have seven questions there for potential clients (not including the site category and description)... yet three of these have to do with the site colors and two are asking about the kind of technology to be used on the site. It looks to me like you're trying to ride the horse by yanking on its tail and sticking a carrot in its rectum (in other words, you're going at this backwards). Even with the site category and description fields, you're not getting at the very first thing you need to find out from a client: what they are expecting this site to do. Forget about site colors, iframes, etc. The first thing you need to do is sit down with the client, talk about the purpose of the site, try to get an idea of what you need on the site to accomplish that purpose, and then come up with a basic structure to present the information. Bells and whistles come much later, if at all. But that's really a secondary point here. The primary point is: your "services" page should list what services you offer, and then give the client a way to contact you. Asking about the site color scheme has nothing to do with services. First tell the client what you can do for them, and hammer out the details [b]after[/b] they contact you. OK, those are the things that really popped out at me. Thanks for leaving the site up this time. :) [img]http://disk919.com/sig/suho1004_0210.gif[/img] [url=http://faq.ozoneasylum.com/FaqWiki/shownode.php?id=270]Cell 270[/url] Loading...
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