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Karl
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Phoenix
Insane since: Jul 2001

posted posted 10-30-2003 18:28

Hello, I'm looking for a site review for: www.mywebmarketer.com

Also, if you are interested in doing a redesign of the site I'd pay. I would only need the orig photoshop artwork/template design (i would slice it up myself).

Karl

Rinswind 2th
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Den Haag: The Royal Residence
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 10-30-2003 19:29

This is a short review after a short look ok.

There are somethings i would rethink if i where you:
1) On the heading graphic there is a link to the example pages, with mozilla it's hardly to see what it is (blue on blue)
so don't show it or make it stand out. I would prefer you skipped the link, since it's already on the menu to the right.

2) The homepage has an horizontal scrollbar...which is not needed for different reasons: the width of 1024px should not need an horizontal scroll, the other pages don't have this horizontal scroll, there is no extra info after scrolling the page to the left.

3) On the homepage the big picture is very distracting from the info you want to give. The picture distracts so much it made me overlook the menu. Only with a good second look i spotted the menu on the left side.

4) Menu itself looks like one big link when i mouseover it. There is no distincion between the links. This added with point 3 makes navigation harder then needs to be.

5) The client example page looks very different compared with the other pages, it made me wonder if i was still on the same site specially since the other pages doesn't seem to change anyway.

Overall i the site looks too much as a powerpoint presentation with a shortage off contents and those 'nice colored' pictures. Add a bit more content, add someinfo about the company behind it, add some contact info and make the menu stand out a bit more and your site would improve a lot.

Btw i am not shure this is the right place to ask for a redesign and offer too pay money....

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"Art has to be forgotten. Beauty must be realized."
Piet Mondriaan

DL-44
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: under the bed
Insane since: Feb 2000

posted posted 10-30-2003 19:43

I agree with most of what rinswind said.

Most important points (IMO) -

1) why so damn wide?? I am at 800x600 at the moment, and I can barely make sense of the page. Partly because of the uneccesarily wide page, and partly because -

2) there is very little organization. Things seem as thought they were jsut stuck on the page with no thought to placement or visual impact.





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