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Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-04-2003 19:02

ok well what do u think?

well its still work in progress, I will resize it and stuff.....
just wanted to know what do u think about the shape and all......by the way what kind of effect may fit this shape.....I am thinking of something "aqua" like

so what do ya think?

mahjqa
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: The Demented Side of the Fence
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 01-04-2003 19:37

It looks interesting, quite tribal-ish... but so far the letters don't seem to be very inegrated with all the shapes. The font doesn't really fit, it's much too square for the smooth and flowing shapes you've got. All the pointy and sharp ends make it look very agressive, I don't know how intentional that is.

aroma
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: uk
Insane since: Sep 2001

posted posted 01-04-2003 20:08

resize change colours and add transparency!!!!

Cheers Aroma

Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-04-2003 20:35

hehe...me the bastard, mahjqa wannabe!!! well actaully big thanks goes to you my buddy mahjqa....if not buddy whatever you inspired me man with your sig!!! I will work more in the center and will change the fonts


Yup Yup...aggresive smooth and sharp...thats 100% Ruski style....not only in PS but also pencil/paper....i developed that style while learning how to draw....my goal was always make the eyes sharp narrow and smooth....later I started to do the same thing with hair as you can see here some stuff I have done a couple of years ago........most of you have seen it, but heck [I NEED A F#$^*ING SCANNER]
i have done lots of cool new drawings


I always admired Tetsuya Nomura, Yoji Shinkawa, Ayami Kojima, and Hiroaki Samura
big thanks goes to these people even thou I dunno them in person I am a big fan of them

[This message has been edited by Ruski (edited 01-04-2003).]

Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-05-2003 03:24

ok here is an update...I have done some improvement with shape


well what do you think about the fonts or the center?
Hmm...is it better now?



mas
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: the space between us
Insane since: Sep 2002

posted posted 01-05-2003 15:14

yep, better now......and don't forget to remove the white bg and add transparacy

-THE SPACE-

Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-05-2003 17:28

well how about now? I dont know about those effects but still, what do you think?




hehe....shit, too freaking big



[This message has been edited by Ruski (edited 01-05-2003).]

mas
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: the space between us
Insane since: Sep 2002

posted posted 01-05-2003 17:32

yes, too big, but transparacy works well
nice

Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-05-2003 17:33

and now?



kinda small huh?

Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-05-2003 17:39

ok another try....well? how about now




Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

posted posted 01-05-2003 18:21

Ruski: Looks a little too blurry and the font still needs some work. Starting to look good though I like the idea and how you've realised it.

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Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-05-2003 21:04

i think I am done with it..



Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-07-2003 21:15

ok thats is finnaly adding some effect, while moving my name to the side, heck i want to keep it more simple than confusing!!!







[This message has been edited by Ruski (edited 01-07-2003).]

mas
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: the space between us
Insane since: Sep 2002

posted posted 01-07-2003 21:47

i personally don't like this effect
keep the upper one

-THE SPACE-

EzRa-D
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Dec 2002

posted posted 01-07-2003 23:56

i like the yellow one better rus

IMHO stick with the yellow and maybe play about with the satin style, bevels are often overused, and the blue glass style doesnt really match the halloween orange of the asylum

Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-08-2003 00:06

hmm...I see, well I will see what i can do....soon to come

Suho1004
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Seoul, Korea
Insane since: Apr 2002

posted posted 01-08-2003 08:32

Definitely go with the yellow...

DL-44
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: under the bed
Insane since: Feb 2000

posted posted 01-08-2003 17:45

This type of design always works better flat - the flatter the better.

I would go a step farther in the yellow one even, and remove the whitish outline - leaving simply the orange/yellow solid color.



Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-12-2003 19:06

Sorry if it took me long.... I was just too lazy or didnt have time.....

anyway I decided to remove my name and simply go with shape.....also added some outer glow just for kick



punchdrunk
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Calgary,Ab Canada
Insane since: May 2001

posted posted 01-12-2003 20:35

For a "tribal" design the edges should be crisp and clean. The outter glow effect you used just makes the edges look fuzzy, IMHO. If I were you I would also get rid of the six shapes across the bottom. They dont seem to be tied into the body of the piece and it would make your sig shorter as well.

EzRa-D
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Dec 2002

posted posted 01-12-2003 20:42

i agree the outer glow doesnt work very well i kinda liked it when you had the lighter inner glow going on a previous version, also this could be a bit smaller, just see if you can size it down a little without losing detail


Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-12-2003 21:34

well what about removing the name is it better? or not...

Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-12-2003 22:03

ok ok glow is gone.....





Xdreamer.ch
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Switzerland
Insane since: Mar 2001

posted posted 01-13-2003 03:51

better but I would shrink it down a bit...

MalFunkShun
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: PA
Insane since: Jul 2001

posted posted 01-14-2003 21:12

I'm just wondering and this may be a silly question, but

Did you use the pen tool with anchors to make these shapes?
I'm thinking of making a tribal tattoo for myself and was wondering how I should go about it.
THANKS


A wise man once said;
"I don't know!?!?"

mahjqa
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: The Demented Side of the Fence
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 01-14-2003 22:12

Yup. The pen tool is simply made for this stuff. Open PS, whack that F1 button, and you've got a great explanation. It's a bit weird at first, but when you get the hang of it it's a great tool.

Ruski
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From:
Insane since: Jul 2002

posted posted 01-15-2003 00:14

haha yeah dude, thats what its just for.....actually I am having trouble doing it with pencil and paper....but man, pen tool just kick ass....and hey its my first try using the pen tool, so dont be shy....pick it up and play around.....

Here is good advice......look for some cool looking shape you like, and try practicing coping it first before making original.... open it as a new file, then make a layer on top of it and start adjusting your shape using the pen tool.

After practicing for awhile try make your own......

Actually I didnt copy anything, just did several tries and look what I got...

Its pretty easy!


Rameses Niblik the Third
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: From:From:
Insane since: Aug 2001

posted posted 01-15-2003 14:16

Dammit, I need one of those pen things!

Raptor
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: A�, MI, USA
Insane since: Nov 2001

posted posted 01-15-2003 16:26

PSP has a pen tool, doesn't it?

(they aren't talking about tablets, RN3)

Emperor
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist with Finglongers

From: Cell 53, East Wing
Insane since: Jul 2001

posted posted 01-15-2003 16:49

Yep PSP has a pen tool - its pos. not as good as PS' yet but it works well and PSP has support for Shapes which are like cliparty things (hows that for a poor explanation). Have a look at the resources here:
http://development.gurusnetwork.com/links/358/

Ahhh there acually isn't anything there hold On I'll dig out a few of the links I have for that:

[edit: Ah ha they have sneaked into the PSP tutorials area - I'll move them across later but they can currently be found here:
http://development.gurusnetwork.com/links/344/ ]

And for those with PS the best pen tool tutorial is here :
www.gurusnetwork.com/tutorials/photoshop/pen1intro.html

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