Preserved Topic: logo design... (Page 1 of 1)

This was made in illustrator so i guess it didn't fit in the photoshop forum...i made it for print for a real estate agent and wanted to get some feedback on it...



hmm...made for print on white paper, looks kinda strange against the forum bg...oh yeah, it'll be pressed on a hiedleberg(sp?) at about the size of a postage stamp for its first appearance...

-j




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[This message has been edited by netmosis (edited 01-25-2001).]

[This message has been edited by netmosis (edited 01-25-2001).]

Personally I think you could do a lot better. I dunno, it just doesnt look good to me. Is the top square supposed to be a chimmney(sp?) ?

missing a front door..... as a logo it is OK... and if it only gonna be that small.. i.e. business card or letter head it should work... only question I have is why the 'triangles'? they seem a bit in yer face.... mayybe smaller one wouldnt notice the overlap of the corners of the 3 triangles, but at the size it displays now it looks a bit strange...

not sure how one would add a door and not make it look cluttered?.. but was ust thinking out loud.. tis important to remember that it is designed for a small logo

~Vp~

um to much red space for me....

Yep... it's gotta stay small.... and there is too much red.
I am not particularly fond of it.
I definately don't like that line that goes out from the upper right hand corner of the window and extends beyond the roof.

Yes, I think you could do better as well.

well, I think the concept is good, but like everyone esle has said...there's too much red.

and those triangle really are quite distracting. Like I said, the concept is good....but it needs much more refining.

well as you guys said it does look a lot better small...the final is only about the size of a nickel...i guess printed on paper or on a white bg it looks a lot less red....the surrounding white kinda balances everything out...for web i guess it'll take a lot more refining...as it will be pressed i'm playing around with dye cutting the window panes to reveal something behind it...just a thought...i did a test with an exacto and it may turn out ok...this is definitely not meant to be printed large...as you guys said letterhead corners, business cards, christmas cards, brochures...that's about all its meant for though...the line wieght is about 65% at the final size....maybe after i get some printed i'll do a photo spread and i can show you how it turns out...thanks...i'll play around some more...i've got a few other logos for the same client that may get a review...
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j



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