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drcyc
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate

From: tempe, az, usa
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 08-15-2000 17:53

This is my latest work. I've been using Photoshop for the last 2 years and I was just wondering what other people thought of my work. Check out this url:

http://www.allmsu.com

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

dr.cyclops

Wes
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist

From: Inside THE BOX
Insane since: May 2000

posted posted 08-15-2000 18:48

Personally, I think it looks pretty cool. I like the splatter. The scan lines in it bugged me a little at first, but then it grew on me. The only thing I would work on is the jaggies around the circle. A subtle drop shadow should help with that, though. Nothing drastic, just a black circle on a layer beneath it, Gaussian blurred about .5 to 1 pixel. Something like that.

Good work.


twItch^
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: the west wing
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 08-15-2000 19:02

Fantastic, my friend. Clean, good usage of white space--I love open, clean, solid colored spaces. Love the scan lines--lose the jaggedness around the circle--either blur like wes said or select the circle, inverse and expand by 1 pixel and delete it...or just re-do the circle...

perhaps the black outline could be a gray outline, I dunno.


mikey milker
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist

From:
Insane since: Apr 2000

posted posted 08-15-2000 21:34

it took you two years to make that? (shut up mikey, you bitch)

seriously though.. that's alright, the spatter with the lines through is decent. but uhm, that's like an image that would take maybe 5-10 minutes to make.. you got any other stuff?

cheers.mikey.milker





drcyc
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate

From: tempe, az, usa
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 08-16-2000 01:05

First of all, thanks a lot for everyone who gave me suggestions on how to improve the allMSU graphic. My designs are always improving and something that I may do today could be outdone by tomorrow's work. I'm sure a lot of you feel the same way.

If you want to see another example of my work, go to:

http://www.ryanshaltry.com/portfolio

There isn't a whole lot there, but there is a couple of graphics. Just so you know, the graphic on the bottom was made for my girlfriend and took about 4-5 hours total. Yes, a long time, but sometimes it's hard to get things looking exactly the way I want.

Anyway, any comments, suggestions, or criticisms would be greatly appreciated (again)!

dr.cyclops

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