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Kuraishi
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate

From: Cincy, Ohio, USA
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 08-22-2000 00:04

My second piece of art. Soon to be my sig.



Tell me what you think.

DocOzone
Maniac (V) Lord Mad Scientist
Sovereign of all the lands Ozone and just beyond that little green line over there...

From: Stockholm, Sweden
Insane since: Mar 1994

posted posted 08-22-2000 01:29

Better. It needs more of something, either a cool edge treatment to separate it from the background, or another treatment to make it bland in. It's also a bit tall, could you make it shorter and wider? Dig the wolf, that was nice.

Your pal, -doc-

DocOzone
Maniac (V) Lord Mad Scientist
Sovereign of all the lands Ozone and just beyond that little green line over there...

From: Stockholm, Sweden
Insane since: Mar 1994

posted posted 08-22-2000 01:30

It doesn't really need to be bland. Blending in could be cool, though. <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/wink.gif">

Your pal, -doc-

Sloloem
Bipolar (III) Mad Scientist

From: Camillus, NY, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 08-22-2000 03:56

I agree with doc on the height and blending stuff, but could you use a more legible font on "Black Depth" or whatever it says? and where do you find these heads? they just look...cool

Stevo
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Seattle, WA, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 08-22-2000 07:28

I think it says 'Black Death'... and to be honest, it really doesn't look too tall, maybe a little longer... looks good. <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/smile.gif">

--Stevo--

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