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Mike
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: MN USA
Insane since: Oct 2000

posted posted 10-10-2000 18:19

Hello everyone! I'm looking for feedback on a site I'm developing. I'm pretty new at this and have found Doc's tutorials invaluable. Thanks Doc! Let me know what you think (it's about 95% done in the content area) www.primeadvertising.com/binaco

Thank you

vogonpoet
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Mi, USA
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 10-10-2000 18:41

generally ok.... 2 things that bugged me were once I left the first page I was looking for a home button to return to it? So I presume your first page is mainly a 'splash' page, (entry page) and not meant to be revisited?

the second thing I really didnt like was the lens flare in all your roll over images..
(personal taste thing I guess)

for a first site pretty good <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/smile.gif">

Steve
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Boston, MA, USA
Insane since: Apr 2000

posted posted 10-10-2000 18:47

First reaction is that it loads slow, which you're not going to be able to do much about with all the images you have, and the duplication of everything for roll overs. I would suggest defining a dark gray page background so the graphics look right before the background image loads, and putting in <ALT> tags for the graphics so we have SOMETHING to look at while we wait for images. Can you work in any HTLM text? On graphics-heavy pages it's nice to have something show up while the pages download.

Mike
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: MN USA
Insane since: Oct 2000

posted posted 10-10-2000 23:36

Thank you both. I had the logo at the top of the page in the navagation frame (after the site is entered) as a link back to the main home page. I changed that and added a "home" button. I also changed the background to a dark gray as suggested so it looks better while loading the graphics. Thank you again for the suggestions! <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/smile.gif">

Mike

bunchapixels
Neurotic (0) Inmate
Newly admitted
posted posted 10-11-2000 05:29

hi,
nice site, all im thinking is that there seems to be a real dividion between your first page and the others, which is fine if that's what you want. however, the top navigatory menu thing and the text still look detatched as well.
maybe, the site could use some sort of heading to show which section of the site you are in (eg about binaco), or maybe the onMouseOver state can just stay that way when in that section of the site.
just something to connect the two frames together....
especially considering how graphics intensive the top frame is, and how text based the body is.
interesting javascript for the mouseovers!



pix·el [píks'l , pík sèl ]:
any of the small discrete elements that together constitute an image

Krypton
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: CA
Insane since: Sep 2000

posted posted 10-11-2000 15:27

i can appriciate the advice given and it was well recieved and i love that background and the recesssss - one point i have is the first page the lenses too many maby just for the rool overs - secondly theres no discriptons to whats behind the pic -should mebby have words on roll overs telling wut it is instead of pot luck -????

i also like where the home button is mebby coulda been contact though - im no expert aside from that a good portfolio piece- best of luck -hrmm mebby i should mosey on over to docs tuts-
krypton-

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