Preserved Topic: Give me some advice~thanks~! (Page 1 of 1)

changedesign.51.net



[This message has been edited by acheng (edited 01-20-2001).]

To start off with, the overall design is very well done! Looks professional. A few things take away from the professional feel, though ...

My screen is at 800x600 and your site runs off the right edge of the screen, causing a horizontal scroll bar to appear. Yuck.

Improper grammar. Professional person do professional things? Should be Professional people do professional things. Or Professional person does professional things. Definitely need to fix that!

Unless you are planning on putting something in that orange box at the top of the page, I strongly suggest you slice off at least the top half of it. It's too much in my opinion.

The "aboutus" link brings up a bio of only one person. Maybe change it to "aboutme" instead.

The bio text is incredibly small and real hard to read. I suggest enlarging a bit.

Otherwise, this is a good start.

HI!NICE TO MEET A CHINESE HERE!YOU ARE SENCOND CHINESE I MEET IN HERE!FRIST IS YUANFANG !HAVE YOU CAME TO BLUEIDEA.COM .
THE WINDOWS EFFECE FORM MRICOBRIAN.COM IS TOO MUCH USED IN SOME WEBSITE ABOUT DESIGN IN CHINA!
BUT THAT 'S A GREAT WORK OF YOUR WEBSITE!
WISH LEARN SOMETHING FROM YOU!
HEHE ~~~~

BeeKay : thank you very much~~

I love the design. Very nice.

The orange area at the top is too big. Unless you're going to toss something up there, you need to break it up with something.

"Professional Person Does Professional Things" - I'm not so sure I'd capitalize all the words.

The nav links at the bottom are a little too fuzzy. I'd clear them up a bit.

The scroller on the workshow page is pretty cool, but the images in the scroller are too light. I'd darken them a little.

Otherwise, an AWESOME design.



Pat Richard
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here's my advice:

an apple every 8 hours keeps 3 doctors away...

here's my advice for your site:

shorten the orange part on top...and make those rectangular blocked out images on the right side do something...internal caps make you look like a wanna be 7337 h@c73r...don't use internal caps, fix up some of the english grammar...

good work...



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simple and clean design.. I agree with the comments about 'professional people do professional things'

also about the orange space.. I would guess you will be adding a banner there at some point...

only thing I foound was your preload didnt seem to work on my browser (NN4.04) even though it looks like a DW javascript? not sure why that is....

overall a pleasant site, even though the style is not particularly to my liking..

Ahhhh, are those chromeless windows really necessary? I'm starting to hate them...

Man I luv ya style! It's very clean and those are great colors. Look's very professional!
But I'd suggest that you'd try how they would look if it wouldn't open new windows. I don't know if it would be cooler or anything but just though it could look cool then also!

But simply:
Great colors, good grafix, great design work and very very nice indeed!

Cheers

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