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cobweb
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate

From: Kingston, Jamaica
Insane since: Feb 2001

posted posted 02-16-2001 16:21

Actually, to add a little dimension to my prtfoilo. please be brutal!
http://www.cobwebstudio.com/dalmatians/dalmatians.htm

taxon
Neurotic (0) Inmate
Newly admitted
posted posted 02-16-2001 17:37

Hmm.... interesting...

1.) The dogs that run across the screen at the very beginning are annoying to repeat visitors.
2.) The wav. sounds of the dogs barking..... i don't know.... they just don't seem to fit in as well as they should.
3.) That noise on MouseOver of your buttons..... has to go.
4.) Why the cheering noise when you go to "The Making" section?
5.) I find it annoyin that the buttons trigger different effects to bring the text in.... but I understand you did it that way.
6.) When you click on the "cast", it's annoying the way that box shakes up and down.
6.) There's a typo in the "Anita" section.
7.) Make those background dogs..... move less frequently.
8.) Lastly, due to it's size, I don't know why you didn't just have it spawn in it's own, non-rescalable window.....

Those are the more negative side of this. I'll be back later to give my take on the positives... tiem to get some rest right now.

I will end on this..... All in all, I think it's pretty good.

cobweb
Nervous Wreck (II) Inmate

From: Kingston, Jamaica
Insane since: Feb 2001

posted posted 02-16-2001 18:04

Extensive constructive critique. Cool!

The site's target audience is basically kids so, it's gotta be noisy and there has to be constant movement in order to keep their attention. (We all know how short thier attention span can be). I will however change the sound fx on the buttons. It's plain bad!

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