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it depends on what you call marketable, doesn't it?


(Edited by I X I on 07-10-2004 10:36)

and on this bkg


it needs work, I know...

things to fix:
1. Jerky Animation
2. Transparency

any other thougths?




...Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most (ozzy osbourne)

The jerky animation would be helped by adding more frames.

And I've got to say that I think you could be a lot more creative with the "Juice-O-Matic." I mean, it's just a blue box with white lettering. In the words of a famous art critic: "Once again, your visual style just looks thrown together. It looks like you don't care."

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...Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most (ozzy osbourne)

The cans looks flat also. Adding some shadows and one or two highlights here and there would increase the impression of volume.

good lord, it's 5 in the morning here in the states (CST), what are all of you inmates doing up at this hour?

thankyou poi,
they did look a lot better until I shrank them down to 1/4 the original size




...Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most (ozzy osbourne)

(Edited by I X I on 07-10-2004 12:40)

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I X I said:

good lord, it's 5 in the morning here in the states (CST), what are all of you inmates doing up at this hour?

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I return the question to you. It's ~1pm here, and it must be ~9pm in Seoul.

I'm nocktournal (sp?)
actually, the whole story, in case you're interested :
I've been in school year round, highschool and summer courses in college for the last 4 years. I graduated highschool c/o '03 and went back to college that summer, then fall and spring (that makes about a year and a half altogether college credits now). I've been on my first summer vacation since my freshman year in highschool for the past 2 months or so and I've managed to get on a nocktournal sleep pattern (up all night, sleep all day). I'm really enjoying it, but unfortunately I'll be starting back this fall semester, and registration is this upcoming week oh well, it's been fun while it lasted




...Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most (ozzy osbourne)

(Edited by I X I on 07-10-2004 13:13)

not even sure if I set up transparency on this version, but I think I've gotten it a little bit better, what do you guys think?






...Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most (ozzy osbourne)

Well, it certainly has more dimension. I think the cans could still use some depth, as poi mentioned above. And there seems to be a jerk in the animation, too.

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It's getting there I X I. I would suggest;
Setting the transparency.
Adding a few more frames to make it smoother. (The babies vanish before they completly enter the blue box).
More definition to the cans.
Something to the blue box, text perhaps? (Youthinator or some such nonesense)

:::tao::: ::cell::

Well, the cans actually had text and texture to them, I just was working on it at 4x the current size and when I shrank it they kinda lost legibility and what texture they had. They said "90% Baby Juice" and "Not From Concentrate" lol

And I'd like to make a metallic texture to the "Juicer" as I've been calling it, but I have so much trouble trying to make out what colors it should be because I basically only see in black and white on my monitor (if you haven't heard yet, my screen's red).

I'll be working on the cans, trying to get some depth on them, at least as best as I can.... I think I'll try a little trick the doc taught me




...Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most (ozzy osbourne)