Topic: My new site (Page 1 of 1)

http://www.onefreehost.com/ryanvh22/2/Main.html

Comments:
-it's still a work in progress (obviously)
-right now I only have a laptop pad, so once I get a mouse and tablet, I will be able to make a much better graphic to replace the one at the top of the center column
-this is the first site that I've actually typed the code, with the acception of this:
http://www.onefreehost.com/ryanvh22/map2.html
which didn't turn out too well XD.


Any constructive critizism is welcomed

anyone?

just posting tosee how much time has passed



edit: almost 30 minutes, someone help this man out!

(Edited by JKMabry on 09-03-2004 00:28)

Give people some time.. Complaining about not gettnig any answers within the first 5 minutes of posting doesn't come of as good manners...

Don't have much time right now, but a few quick notes. Remove the kill-bill movie. It serves no purpose and draws attention away from the rest of the page. You should remove all of the scrollbars in the middle area. Scrolling the whole page is more natural. The navigation doesn't work, which you probably know.

Like the graphics on the page. Qute, litte white headed thing you got there

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My eyes spent a maybe 30 seconds wandering aimlessly around the site sorta looking for navigation but kinda feeling defeated and probably not looking as hard as I could've. Felt defeated because everything's the same color.

Hey, the scrollabrs are the same color as well. I probably wouldn't have noticed those either ecept for the fact that I tried to scroll the page using my mouse wheel and got stuck inside one of the interior scrolly bits, bah, hate that.

I resized the window and the colums stayed the same width but the margins increased, that's kinda wonky.

Man that's about it for now, I'm really not motivated to go much further. Considering it's only your second hand made site/page/whateveritis I'll give you a hearty congrats and pat on the back *PAT!* I'm assuming this thing has no particular purpose but for you to play around, and welp, you've done that! Have some more fun, make it better.

First off too many images, takes forever to load on a Dial Up yes unfortunately it's still being used .

Second; personally I hate too many scrollers, one is enough horizontal or viertical your choice.

Third;

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JKMabry said:

I resized the window and the colums stayed the same width but the margins increased, that's kinda wonky.

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I second that.

Forth; I'm looking at your code right here and what do I see... no CSS?!? Whoa man you've embeded everything into your code, if you plan on updating it'll be hell!!

Finally; dude I'd would have said "If this was v2 I'd hate to see v1"... but seeing as you've already shown us that... dude you need to work on it some more sorry to say that .

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