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ok now it should work...

edit: yup thast about it....gimmy some c&c for my shit work. and sorry for 56k users


















































(Edited by Ruski on 10-14-2004 05:24)

(Edited by Ruski on 10-14-2004 05:26)

Nothing there. =\

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"Abortion clinics are like expressways to heaven."

Nice stuff there.

I really like fat.JPG. I think you convey such style pretty well. I would like to see if there is some other stuff like it.

girlhead.JPG and jamil.JPG are quite great portraits. girlhead reminds me a lot of Angelina Jolie, and has a good snesation of depth. jamil's portrait shows a lot of life, something I'd like to see in more portraits.

My complaint with your other work is that, while having a good anatomy, it doesn't stand out. I know a doodle should not really need that, but I know you can do better on that matter. The dark-toned ones have a nice lighting, but it would be better if the focal point elements stood out a little more; it's a bit hard to see them.

still1 looks like just a perspective excecirse, or something like that. And it look smudged, even when it probably isn't.

I can't tell what the hell number 1 is.

Still, nice stuff.

EDIT: The lats 5 ones didin't load before...I can't say i like them, the lineart is a bit shaky for such staright figures, and while the shape is correct, it doesn't make me think they are truly a trash can, a bottle, and i forgot what else there was (stupid lack to preview other posts while editing)
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Sexy Demoness cel

(Edited by Alevice on 10-14-2004 06:03)

(Edited by Alevice on 10-14-2004 06:06)

Please xcuse me if I repeat something Amerasu said

I really like most of these, so I'm just going to list off my crits:


1. You have the folds down right - a good concept of how the fabric is interacting with the light, but your edges look slightly, and unnaturally, soft. Sometimes it's appropriate, but others it isn't. Also, it'd be nice to see a lighter color for highlights in the bottom half (as opposed to the neutral gray throughout most of the fabric.)

2. I'd suggest working more to define form, as opposed to leaving it implied. It's pretty obvious, but keeping the entire drawing at the same level of "finish" makes it look much more "professiona." I'm thinking specifically of the head and legs.

3, 4. Maybe work a bit on line quality? You seem to restroke a lot, and on the first it's used to good effect in the outline, but othertimes it looks fairly sloppy.

5. Hehe, very funny. No real suggestions here.

6. The anatomy here is a bit worse than the the other drawings, especially in the neck and head.

7, 8, 9. I'd work on giving the pieces a less muddy quality. Try defining the different areas in short, quick, more assertive, strokes. Right now you have many of the same sketching techniques going into these, but the end result looks much less clean.

10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16. I really like these alot. Especially 10. No real crits. Just, again, work on line quality.

17. My only crit is that the work isn't very "crisp." The same proble mas in 7/8/9, etcetera.

18, 19. Both of these are very good. Much cleaner, and more defined.

20, 21, 22, 23, 34. I don't like these as much. It looks like they were from observation, but general perspective rules were disregarded.

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"Abortion clinics are like expressways to heaven."

Your images won't show, for me anywho.

cbf and Alevice, thank you for being objective, I needed that.

Yes it's true I am pretty relaxed when it comes to drawing and I have to take in more seriously and try to do whole lot more.

The reason I draw so freely is, because I feel that it brings me closer to naturalism, motion, and gives imagery sense of gravity, mass and weight...but the downside is it never looks finished.

I will post somethign else later....I dont know when.. dont ask

Hugh- I dont know what might be the problem, everything looks fine to me. As far as I can guess, perhaps the school's server is pure shit.

just a little blurb... i own a Curves for Women facility here and I love the "fat" picture... one can look at it several ways, comedic, sincere, fun...

nice work! i'd hate to see what you'd do if it were something really serious.

:-)