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mas
Maniac (V) Mad Librarian

From: the space between us
Insane since: Sep 2002

posted posted 11-21-2004 16:53

ok, this is getting boring, i know :-(
i am posting it anyway and asking for c & c
www.thespacebetweenus.com

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RhyssaFireheart
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Out on the Sea of Madness...
Insane since: Dec 2003

posted posted 11-21-2004 23:20

I like it, except that the navigation bar doesn't look good above the left side graphic that you have. Also the left graphic is slightly more reddish than the header, , but it's not enough to look like it's supposed to be that way instead of a color mismatch. JMO though.

Rereading what I wrote, what I mean by "doesn't look good" is that when I'm looking at it, the break in flow (not sure how else to describe it) bothers me. It could just be me though.

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Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: France
Insane since: Jun 2002

posted posted 11-21-2004 23:40

Overall, it's really good.
Now for some deeper "critiques" and comments, IMHO :

  • it lacks of contrast
  • the font used for the navigation looks cheap :\
  • if you wish to use an underline for the navigation, it'd be great to underline the items all time ( not only the :hover ), to emphasize the fact that they link to something. At first sight I missed the navigation.
  • the 2 white vertical lines in the header seem a bit out of place. There's nothing similar for the main area. The content is on a white background, and the "neighbourhood" is blue.
  • the shadow casted by the header is a bit wide, or the gradient is too linear.
  • the difference of color between the background of the H2 and the "neighbourhood" is a bit odd
  • it'd be great to recall the dithering of the header somewhere else.
  • the animated underline on the links is pleasant

But all this is just my own picky opinion and about some points of detail.

Jestah
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Long Island, NY
Insane since: Jun 2000

posted posted 11-28-2004 23:56

It looks fine in Safari but falls apart completely in Internet Explorer. I haven't looked at either Firefox or Netscape though.



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