Topic awaiting preservation: Hitlers man (wip) (Page 1 of 1)

Come to think of it i never have posted any finished works here before.... acctulaly anyware.
critics , comments, always helpfull during the process.


http://img169.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img169&image=stage27zh.jpg

(Edited by OldArmen on 02-15-2005 05:19)

Armen: Fine work - what was the inspirtaiton there?

I still think the arm and legs could have done with "finishing"/completeing better (not really expressing this right) they just seem to stop. If you wanted it to seem like they were mergeing into cloud I suppose the backgroudn would have needed more work.

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if I went 'round saying I was an Emperor just because some moistened bint had lobbed a scimitar at me, they'd put me away!

So far so good, it has a nice comic feel to it. The lighting is good, but be careful with this, if you go into too much detail you'll loose the action hero comic look. Unless of course you plan an cleaning up the sketch lines.
You really do need to finish the legs and arms, I dont think you'll be able to take an easy route out with this one. Your gonna have to do fingers....

You title says WIP but your post suggests its finished, if it is finished your better off cropping his legs out completly. Other than that the only real flaw I can see is the muscles on the arm on the left (his right arm) are weird. and his head is a little to much to the right, I know he's looking the other way but his neck(the base of his head moreso) doesnt seem to start in the right place but not by much, if at all..
Horizontal and vertical mirroring can usually point this kind of thing out to you, its like seeing your drawing for a second time.

oh and the background is tits, but I recon you know that :P hehe

THanks, inmates...
oh what i ment by saying that was i'd never posted any finished works anyware, including this one..
inspiration? i was listening to a perfect circle, and i wasn't thinking about anything perticular.
I always post my works halfway cuz i wana see if the sketch itself is good enoght to finish. Hugh i'd did flip the pic verticaly and now i saw what i did wrong, like the guy is leaning towards out of its balance, and his right arm is way to big even though it's close to the camera.
But why is it that, i didn't see what i drew wrong before?

Theres like some latin or french word for it, its like the way when you read over something you spot mistakes. A refreshed look at it. Also because you made it, its internally assumed to be correct first time round. When you flip the image it forces you to actually look at it again as a new image, rather than see some lines and recall it from memory.

Lookin forward to an update...

Also, anyone know what that word is ? Its like Mentus Refreshmus or something, heh.

here is after fliping it and working on it... still to come. i'm kinda slow in these things.

Whats the giant blue monster going to do to Robo-Wes???

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if I went 'round saying I was an Emperor just because some moistened bint had lobbed a scimitar at me, they'd put me away!

actually he is his master--"the creator" "puppetier"

another stage

i'm really sorry , but i'm like drowing in my college, so , forgive me guys that i'm posting so shit late...anyways, it sucks. GO TO ART CLASSSSSSSS....

DONT KNOW WHAT GENOCIDE HAS TO DO WITH IT, BUT IT'S A COOL SOLGAN(if i have it right).



(Edited by OldArmen on 03-11-2005 09:44)

Good stuff

A couple of thoughts:

1. Finish that hand!!!

2. I prefered the figure when he was bluer and I'd also be interested to see you develop the battlefield theme you were toying with in the first picture you shared. It gave the idea that he was a giat blue creature which is certainly intriguing.

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if I went 'round saying I was an Emperor just because some moistened bint had lobbed a scimitar at me, they'd put me away!

Hi i've send an email to the ISP you are abusing 'cos
i realy don't like swastica's
A great deal of people have died because of that sign
its sick. especialy if you use a gollem-like creature (gollems were 'founded' by the 'Jews')



on the other hand the drawing is very good indeed.

You sent an email to his ISP???

"'cos i realy don't like swastica's"
Your not suppose to like them for what they stand for and thats the point of it being in the image.

The creature is clearly evil. If your not joking, your the biggest loser in the world and should shove a bible up your ass.

"gollems were 'founded' by the 'Jews'" What the hell are you like ?? So, if you draw a leprechaun should I send an email to your host provider?

(Edited by Hugh on 03-23-2005 22:28)

You get offended so you send in a report. How about you just leave the thread and don't visit his site.

I can also tell you that a great many people did not die because of a sign, a great many people died because of evil men with evil ideas we able to convince stupid people, like yourself, that their people who didn't conform should be reported on, jailed and ultimately killed. You through your ignorance and failure to properly apply common sense and reason are more a danger than any symbol of a dead cause will ever be.

So while you are on this topic, I think you should go off and report google http://images.google.com/images?q=swastika or any of those that have links to some of the 50 pages worth of pictures, or any of their 468,000 results that respond when you do a simple search for the word.

I really don't understand why some of you Europeans feel that you need to censor anything relating to Hitler or the Nazi movement, I think you really need to get over it. Belgium is pretty close to Germany, so maybe you have still feel some evil taint of Nazi Germany, but Hitler was the one who burned books, and then you are trying to do the same to the Internet, what Hypocrisy . So with that, I think it is time you take your ignorance and weird sense of conformity elsewhere, I for one do not want it here.

Armen, I am really sorry to rant like this in your thread, but you did an really nice piece of work there, and I hate that people feel that they must attack people for doing things that they don't understand or agree with.

Dan @ Code Town

Well put WarMage.

Although I've never known of any censorship concerning Nazis and I'm European, maybe you gotta be on the continent, closer to Germany. On that note I recon the US has stricter censorship in general too, but I guess the subject matter is a big factor.

Armen, look what qbicle has made us do to your thread, contact his ISP!!!! :P

qbicle: By the way, Shindlers list is full of swasticas, should it be banned? By your logic it should, but that would be mentally retarted, like you.

Woops, I think i've crossed a line here (and a big yellow one indeed (bad day at work, i guess)).
I've shouldn't done it so harsh.
I am realy sorry and i won't do it again, mom.
You are right it is still a sensitive issue back here.

Clearly, ignorance isn't always bliss. Next time, if you should draw a little pink pony, i WILL like it.
Be sure to put little fluffy clouds in it too.

btw could you lend me a bible, i want to try it sometimes?

I think you did a great job with the shading. I prefer the blue/grey tint you had initally over the green.
I am no expert when it comes to lights and shadows but it strikes me that shadow areas should be little more intense or darker. Also the Swastika should be on a white circular background.

Good stuff Armen !!!

sib

"Your reality check just bounced"