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FatRod
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: #UK SURREY
Insane since: May 2002

posted posted 06-20-2005 14:56

Initial design, only this page so far. Really just want quick design and code feedback if anyone minds... Still a work in progress, especially the right menu so don?t worry about that.

The brief was for something clean and professional looking....

http://www.freewebs.com/reviewsite/index.htm

Cheers

FR

reisio
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Florida
Insane since: Mar 2005

posted posted 06-20-2005 22:57

the code:

  • HTML doesn't validate
  • JavaScript use is horrible
  • ...so many div's...
  • strange/inappropriate use of table
  • .htm...what's that?

the rest:

  • couple of white boxes in a blue-gray box...
  • one image, and that's just a normal text header
  • three navigation areas?!?



(Edited by reisio on 06-20-2005 22:58)

FatRod
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: #UK SURREY
Insane since: May 2002

posted posted 06-21-2005 10:31

oooppps - my bad, I had validated the page, just not that version... sorted now.

Thanks for the feedback Reisio, decided against that scroller anyway.

need to add more images... always struggle on images, i find them the hardest part... spend ages thinking about what and where.

one navigation area will contain a news scroller of some sort but have not deceided which side to impement it on yet hence 3 nav areas...

i'll keep workin..

Cheers

FR

NoJive
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: The Land of one Headlight on.
Insane since: May 2001

posted posted 06-21-2005 18:35

What is 'ERP' ?

Nathus
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Minnesota
Insane since: Aug 2003

posted posted 06-21-2005 19:50
quote:

NoJive said:

What is 'ERP' ?


Enterprise Resource Planning I believe.

FatRod
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: #UK SURREY
Insane since: May 2002

posted posted 06-22-2005 10:40

correct >>

Enterprise resource planning > ERP software, doesn't live up to its acronym. Forget about planning?it doesn't do much of that?and forget about resource, a throwaway term. But remember the enterprise part. This is ERP's true ambition. It attempts to integrate all departments and functions across a company onto a single computer system that can serve all those different departments' particular needs.

anyone else care to add thier 2cents

Suho1004
Maniac (V) Mad Librarian

From: Seoul, Korea
Insane since: Apr 2002

posted posted 06-22-2005 11:36

I took a look at the site yesterday and, honestly, the first thing that struck me was not the design or the code, but the copy. I briefly considered writing a critique of the copy, but then I figured that a) you probably didn't write it and b) you probably have no control over it anyway. I didn't want to waste my time or yours, so I skipped the critique.

If you'd like me to critique it, though, I'd be glad to do that. And if you'd rather I not, I won't take offense.

___________________________
Suho: www.liminality.org | Cell 270 | Sig Rotator | the Fellowship of Sup

FatRod
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: #UK SURREY
Insane since: May 2002

posted posted 06-23-2005 10:02

Suho: a) yes b) i do have a little influence. I have been asked to get the site back up in the search engine rankings so that will be a good excuse to influence the copy.

Maybe when i have had a play with it i might take you up on your kind offer.

Suho1004
Maniac (V) Mad Librarian

From: Seoul, Korea
Insane since: Apr 2002

posted posted 06-23-2005 15:31

Sure thing. I'll keep an eye out.

___________________________
Suho: www.liminality.org | Cell 270 | Sig Rotator | the Fellowship of Sup



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