Topic: another new design....mhm :-| (Page 1 of 1)

i just finished a new design for my personal website. comments, feedbacks, critics are welcome
(i know its far away from perfect, but i need to now the hard mistakes at least )

I find the mix of vector edged stuff and softedged bitmappy bits distracting. It's pretty busy overall and the mix of elements aren't makin *me* happy!

Those birds man. Oh gosh. Gotta get rid of those birds

I assume graphic design is about all we can comment on since yer markup's usually sold innit? Well there you have my quick driveby.

Good to see yet another version tho, you're tireless!

sun + boobie = good

it would be cool if the horizontal offset of the main box changes with the width of the browser window.
just make it a %-value.
also the haird of the lady in the middle is a bit jaggy. just erase the very thin hair which floats around there.

other than that, nice.

edit: oh and i dont like the black border of the sun. every thing else in your design does not have border and now the one thing that also shouldnt have a border in reality has one.



(Edited by GRUMBLE on 09-17-2005 15:58)