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Wolfen Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: Minnesota Insane since: Jan 2001	posted 12-10-2003 08:33 Ok, I just thought I would show you guys a 'finished' piece click here. 100% Illustrator. Took a month and half to finish. Quite proud of it really. Sanity is optional... (and so is clothes!) Wolfen's Sig Site
Lacuna Maniac (V) Inmate From: the Asylum ghetto Insane since: Oct 2002	posted 12-10-2003 08:40 hey, that turned out nice wolfen....though, the wings seem a bit flat? like...everything else has shading... except the wings. i dunno if i'm explaining it right... but no matter if it's a finished piece
Wolfen Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: Minnesota Insane since: Jan 2001	posted 12-10-2003 08:51 Well, on the original picture that I had, there was no real shading to the wings... that is why I 'layered' the colors in the wings to give them a bit more depth.
Suho1004 Maniac (V) Inmate From: Seoul, Korea Insane since: Apr 2002	posted 12-10-2003 09:37 There's no such thing as a finished piece! Now get back in there and shade those wings! Other than that, though, I like it. ___________________________ Suho: www.liminality.org
counterfeitbacon Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: Vancouver, WA Insane since: Apr 2002	posted 12-10-2003 12:05 The Good: Very solid. Consistant light source. Little things like the chain. Cell shading is cool. The Bad: Two shading styles. Cell shading and smooth (gradient) shading. I personally don't think that they mix well. His arm must hurt. His wings are growing out of his ass. The Ugly: White background __________________ War is Peace, Freedom is Slavery, Ignorance is Strength. [This message has been edited by counterfeitbacon (edited 12-10-2003).] [This message has been edited by counterfeitbacon (edited 12-10-2003).] [This message has been edited by counterfeitbacon (edited 12-10-2003).]
Wolfen Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: Minnesota Insane since: Jan 2001	posted 12-10-2003 19:02 Thank you for the comments guys. I might play with the wings when I have time. (My current personal situation is very bad right now.) I should mention that here is the original picture I had to work with. I got full artist permission. cfb: I see what you mean about the sword and a few other non cel shaded details. Background I could not do anything about. The rest should be covered by looking at the picture, that is all I could go off of. It was a piece that I liked that I just wanted to colorize.
synax Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 Insane since: Mar 2002	posted 12-10-2003 19:05 The only thing that nags me is the fire - it should be rising straight up, not at the same angle as the sword. I realise that it's something that's wrong with the initial sketch, but I'm sure you could fix it easily if it was colored in Illustrator [This message has been edited by synax (edited 12-10-2003).]

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Wolfen
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Minnesota
Insane since: Jan 2001

posted 12-10-2003 08:33

Ok, I just thought I would show you guys a 'finished' piece click here. 100% Illustrator. Took a month and half to finish. Quite proud of it really.

Sanity is optional... (and so is clothes!)

Wolfen's Sig Site

Lacuna
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: the Asylum ghetto
Insane since: Oct 2002

posted 12-10-2003 08:40

hey, that turned out nice wolfen....though, the wings seem a bit flat? like...everything else has shading... except the wings. i dunno if i'm explaining it right... but no matter if it's a finished piece

Wolfen
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Minnesota
Insane since: Jan 2001

posted 12-10-2003 08:51

Well, on the original picture that I had, there was no real shading to the wings... that is why I 'layered' the colors in the wings to give them a bit more depth.

Suho1004
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Seoul, Korea
Insane since: Apr 2002

posted 12-10-2003 09:37

There's no such thing as a finished piece! Now get back in there and shade those wings!

Other than that, though, I like it.

___________________________
Suho: www.liminality.org

counterfeitbacon
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Vancouver, WA
Insane since: Apr 2002

posted 12-10-2003 12:05

The Good:

Very solid.
Consistant light source.
Little things like the chain.
Cell shading is cool.

The Bad:

Two shading styles. Cell shading and smooth (gradient) shading. I personally don't think that they mix well.
His arm must hurt.
His wings are growing out of his ass.

The Ugly:

White background
__________________
War is Peace,
Freedom is Slavery,
Ignorance is Strength.

[This message has been edited by counterfeitbacon (edited 12-10-2003).]

[This message has been edited by counterfeitbacon (edited 12-10-2003).]

[This message has been edited by counterfeitbacon (edited 12-10-2003).]

Wolfen
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: Minnesota
Insane since: Jan 2001

posted 12-10-2003 19:02

Thank you for the comments guys.

I might play with the wings when I have time. (My current personal situation is very bad right now.)

I should mention that here is the original picture I had to work with. I got full artist permission.

cfb: I see what you mean about the sword and a few other non cel shaded details. Background I could not do anything about. The rest should be covered by looking at the picture, that is all I could go off of. It was a piece that I liked that I just wanted to colorize.

synax
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Cell 666
Insane since: Mar 2002

posted 12-10-2003 19:05

The only thing that nags me is the fire - it should be rising straight up, not at the same angle as the sword. I realise that it's something that's wrong with the initial sketch, but I'm sure you could fix it easily if it was colored in Illustrator

[This message has been edited by synax (edited 12-10-2003).]