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Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: NY, USA |
![]() Cheerio! Working on a splash image for Opticulture. It's not coming out the way I'd like it to. I think it's the background (or lack thereof), and the lighting. I figured you kind folks might be able to give me some constructive criticism on the image. Thanks in advance. |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: |
![]() The butterfly wings don't seem to fit. Too smooth for the roughed up rest of it. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 |
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Maniac (V) Inmate From: under the bed |
![]() Overall there are many nice things in it. You could say it's pleasant, I suppose. Kinda cool. |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: Mexico |
![]() It reminds me too much of plenty of winamp 3 skins, specially Invicta. That, and that dl said. |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: NY, USA |
![]() Thanks, all, some very wise bits of advice I'll most certainly think about and incorperate. I'll show you the image when I work on it more. |
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: buttcrack of the midwest |
![]() Not much to add to the wise advice above, but, yea..it`s the 'fliped lighting' that kills the depth and adds to the over-symmetry. And as already stated, the texture needs to be more definitive. |
Maniac (V) Inmate From: Cell 666 |
![]() To me, it seems like that little dude is in some kind of flying craft. That's most likely the reason why the shape in the background seems like an after-thought. |
Paranoid (IV) Inmate From: Darkside of the Moon |
![]() I thought it was nice at first glance... although the other people do have some valid comments. (Vaguely reminds me of abe's odessey for some odd reason...) |