Preserved Topic: A comic strip website. (Page 1 of 1)

Check this out www.ozemail.com.au/~matt1/commute
Its for a comic strip I made, the comments I would appreciate are about what should be in a comic strip website?

-Andrew Huppatz

i want to see the comic at the top. if i hadnt scrolled down to critique it, i probably wouldnt have noticed it.

when i look at your individual comics, youve got mismatched font sizes. most of your site has a fairly small font. but under your comics, youve got a significantly larger font. it doesnt feel like its a part of the rest of the page.

Well the overall layout is fine I suppose. Like La'd said above the comic should be on top or else people would miss it. You might want to make other sections in the website besides just the links. That kinda gets a little boring after a while. I dont have the time to actually check out the other comics but the one on the bottom just isnt funny. I thought it was going to be, scrolling down I got my hopes pretty high, i was ready for a good laugh .... then nothing. Not even a chuckle :\

Besides that the layouts pretty good. The above banner could use some work. The arrow should be thicker to connect better with the text but its still alright.

Jestah
ieJestah@hotmail.com
ICQ - 77252449

Ooh ugh lose the frames.

I think this design would be much better in just a plain table.


Walking the Earth like Kane

Thanks, you guys made some great points, apart from the guy who said I should lose the frames, the way I have set them up is an artwork, people should study the frames and herald me.

I plan to redo the main formatting for the comic strips soon. If you are interesting in seeing it, I?ll send a message here when its done.

Eskimo-X

your usage of those frames is pointless your just doing it so you can have a black border and have it scroll in the middle. layers would be cleaner or at least a table...nothing personal but those comics make me wanna leave the site (please don't start a riot) i just don't like 'em...sorry...good idea though


www.netmosis.com - "we're on the leading edge of a false reality."

your usage of those frames is pointless your just doing it so you can have a black border and have it scroll in the middle. layers would be cleaner or at least a table...nothing personal but those comics make me wanna leave the site (please don't start a riot) i just don't like 'em...sorry...good idea though


www.netmosis.com - "we're on the leading edge of a false reality."

don't tell anyone.. but i think those cartoons are made by a 5-year-old with downs.

*ggaahhhh*

cheers.mikey.milker

shhhh!!!...they still think they are six years old...dammit now i have to go wake up the hippo and find that stupid gnome...


www.netmosis.com - "we're on the leading edge of a false reality."

Ahh you pricks dont know comedy.

-Andrew Huppatz

hahahaha.. that right there was pretty hilarious in of itself.

bahahaaaa... yeah, phew!

cheers.mikey.milker

I'm sorry, but there was nothing funny about those comics at all. At all. I'm surprised I made it through 7 of them. UHHG!

you made it through 7? wow i couldnt stay awake past 3 ...

i went thru about 10, i was just waiting for one to make me smile, to make the site worth while, but it didnt come.

i think i almost read all of them...

they made me feel better about myself.

cheers.mikey.milker

Naa naaa see the irony missed everyone but I'm with Andy! Musta taken a while to set that one up.

Make a bunch of unfunny comics then come back and say Youze pricks don't know funny.
lol. shit I been larfin about that all day. Well done cobber.

I have reworked the web site, although your harsh comments didn?t help me much, instead they made me cry, I would sit in the toilet and just cry sometimes for no particular reason. The pain, the pain.

So if your looking for a good laugh and want to see how super fantastic the new site so you can give me some fantastic comments is go to.
http://www.ozemail.com.au/~matt1/commute

-Andrew Huppatz

Hey!
You guys were harsh with that one!
Ok, the graphics are not tremendous but hey, I have a good laugh!

I loved it!

Bande de petit raton laveur bleu!

hey eskimo, i don't say anything about your content.

but i have some suggestions:
1. lets the user change speed of auto refresh
2. show your comic centered.
<frameset rows="120,*,28">
<frame top>
<frameset cols="*,600,*">
<frame left>
<frame content>
<frame right>
</frameset>
<frame bottom>
</frameset>

3. display more rows

cu, tea

in the words of the fish on #17
"Can't you do any better then that?"
hahaha those things suck

If you want to read more "Commuter Man" I've just uploaded 50 new strips, which I promise are funnier.

In season 2 Commuter Man goes back in time to the wild west and buys a bar! Are you laughing already?

Goto and click on Season 2 on the top. www.ozemail.com.au/~matt1/commute/

-Eskimo

well i read the first 5 or 10....

but it's like making fun of a kid with down's syndrome.. it's just too easy.

all i can say is, i hope you didn't quit your day job.

cheers.mikey.milker

OMG - i think just reading those comics made me stupider.

Thats the problem with commuter man, most people think its unbelievably stupid, but then there are the people who can see beyond it and find the true humor. I was at a party once and some guy that I had never seen before came up to me and said "Hey I really like Commuter Man" that was a real shock and no he didnt have down's syndrome.

-Andrew Huppazt


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Talking to yourself rarely qualifies as a conversation. Still I'm happy you don't have Downs man. That would suck verily.

The only 'true' humuor to be found under the skin there man is getting to the end and thinkin' sheet these are bad. Bad things == funny. I do like your page layout. But your content.... Guess that's a personal thing.


[This message has been edited by Weadah (edited 12-10-2000).]

What kind of drugs were circulating at this party Eskimo? We've ruled out downs, but what of the narcotics?

first he subjects us to horrible comics.... now he's sharing fairy tales. *sigh*

cheers.mikey.milker

Im starting to think one of my friends told the person to come and tell me he was a fan.
Thanks you guys you ruined the dream that people actually liked Commuter Man.


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ya know Eskimo.. if ya don;t slow the sig down ya might cause some of us 'nutters' here to have an epiletic fit... (just like a strobe light)

or maybe if we look at that .sig long enough... we'll actually degrade to the mental state of understanding and enjoying commuter man =)

cheers.mikey.milker

Look at the sig, you feel oddly calm, now relax, you are walking down a corridor, continue looking at the sig, now read all 50 commuter man strips and laugh like you have never before, now relax stop looking at the sig.


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How do I get Commuter Man into yahoo, i've tried at least three times but I get no response from them. Help me! Help Commuter Man!


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