Let us waste no time.
- You're trying to sell yourself as a web development firm, yes? You're gonna want to go with something very flashy; ie, show your best face for potential clients. With that in mind, let us continue.
- I love the color scheme--gray and blue are wonderful together. Yet...they're terribly overdone, and they're overdone poorly.
- The text on the buttons is nearly illegible.
- The angled sides (curved?) are very jagged along the edges. Looks tacky.
- The font is a nice idea, but needs more enhancement. Try playing with different colors, different font itself...you know the drill.
- Back to the buttons; They don't fit the feel of the rest of the page. It seems to have a curvy feel to it overall, and you have these 45 degree angled buttons that scream "I belong elsewhere". The buttons
- could
- fit if the rest of the design was dropped--seems like a lot of work for some fairly simplistic buttons.
- The blip down in the bottom-right corner is gonna give you problems if/when you put text in that area--you're gonna have a huge footer on a mostly small text-area. You might try losing it all-together, or adding more "stuff" to the left of it to fill out that useless space.
- Finally, the page is gonna be awfully small as-is...I'd suggest heaping more stuff onto it to fill out a full 800x600 (which is 770x420 maximized on a normal browser of that resolution)
- All in all, fantastic start.
(edit) Stupid UBB code..
[This message has been edited by twItch^ (edited 16-09-2000).]
posted 09-16-2000 00:12
