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flyer
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Helsingborg, Sweden
Insane since: Oct 2000

posted posted 10-07-2000 15:39

I could like some comment's about my new site. Click here:
Webzone MCL




MigliO
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Italy
Insane since: Mar 2000

posted posted 10-07-2000 16:09

the color scheme is good.

I think that the links to the variuos section are not very visible. You can add a rollover effect on the squares over the section names.

Put a link at the home in the log. I think it's an easy way to give a starting point wherever you are.

flyer
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Helsingborg, Sweden
Insane since: Oct 2000

posted posted 10-07-2000 16:45

Thanks, the reason for having those links there below the squares are that I have seen some webdesign companies have links like that with small dividers in between and then I just wanted to have something more to go with the links why I made the boxes.

And about the home-link. I have a home-link on the logo but I'm not sure everyone figures that out and that's why I created one to the left too.



ZOX
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Southern Alabama, USA
Insane since: Sep 2000

posted posted 10-07-2000 17:57

I like this page, it looks simple and clean. I think it would make more sense to have the little squares working as links as well, and not just the words. At least I tried to click them first.
The butterfly is perhaps a little cliché, but I like it, and you need that reddish to to compensate the blue in the rest of the page.
The line "success is based on minory victories" (is that proper English btw? It sounds a bit odd, but I am sure it can be right. I am not the right person to tell) that line is so light that it is just barely visible on my screen, which means that it would most likely be totally invisible on my flat screens.
In my netscape the frame for the top is a little too small, and so it gets a sharp edge on the bottom. On the other hand, the same thing happens with the picture to the right in my IE.

Ali
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Wolverhampton, West Midlands, England
Insane since: Oct 2000

posted posted 10-07-2000 20:53

Good, clean looking site - like images. All blends together nicely.

Only comment is, if you are on a smaller screen, the top looks cut off.

twItch^
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: the west wing
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 10-09-2000 15:19

Well, your links are clean anyway.. <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/smile.gif">

Cheers on the layout of the site, though, looks excellent. I dig the colors and the feel of the site. Few questions..

"minory" does not exist in the English language...And even if it did, your usage of the phrase in the background is so washed out I could barely read it--you don't want folks to have to strain to read something that could easily be interpreted as a slogan for your firm.

I keep wanting the square images on the top to be links, but I keep being disappointed. Just the text? Oh, come on, extend the href. <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/smile.gif"> Please?

You kids call the Resume a CV, right? Funny.

In any event, nice looking site, bud. <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/smile.gif">

Jestah
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Long Island, NY
Insane since: Jun 2000

posted posted 10-09-2000 16:16

Well I like the overal site although I think the navigation could use a little work. It doesnt seem to fit in with everything else. If someone commented on this above my bad...

vogonpoet
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Mi, USA
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 10-09-2000 16:21

Twitch^ : fyi CV = Curriculum Vitae (latin)

Quaint ain't it?.. that what happens from living on a island!

flyer
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Helsingborg, Sweden
Insane since: Oct 2000

posted posted 10-09-2000 18:28

twItch, good points you have there.

I know it didn't get completly right there with "minory...etc.". What I wanted to do was to translate a swedish saying. But it was a bit too long so I shortened it and rewrote it a bit. Perhaps not so good result after all. And the thing about it beeing very bright was to have it to appear not to much.

And about the square images, many people have pointed it out and belive it or not, even I was about to do it like so at first but then I looked at some webdesign-companies and they had their links like text with dividers in between so I did that too.
But still I wanted to have something more above it, why I added the squares. Perhaps it wasn't the most natural soloution but on the other hand isn't everything what it seems.. =)

And finally about the CV then. In sweden "CV" is your resume. Your list of previous works, educations etc, that is.
Or what is your defenition of "CV" and "Resume" then?

Thanks alot for the comments however..


ZOX
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Southern Alabama, USA
Insane since: Sep 2000

posted posted 10-09-2000 20:24

Flyer, what is the Swedish saying you were trying to translate?
I might be able to help you. After all, I am Swedish, and I have lived in the US for a while, and my fianceé is from there as well <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/smile.gif">

flyer
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Helsingborg, Sweden
Insane since: Oct 2000

posted posted 10-10-2000 18:41

ZOX, ah ok. Well the saying in swedish is:
"Framgång består av en mängd dagliga små segrar"
which would be:
"Success is based on many daily minor victories"

I thought that was a bit too long why I rewrote it.



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