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RammStein
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: cEll 513, west wing of the ninth plain
Insane since: Dec 2000

posted posted 12-27-2000 20:23

now tell me what you think

http://www.unitedrealms.com/main.htm

[note I didn't point you to the splash page]



CEO

twItch^
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: the west wing
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 12-27-2000 20:51

Gollybygosh, I think he's got it.

Snazzed out, love it.
Now, the only issue is the image on the top left:



Is pixely and icky; I'd change it from a gif to a 30-40 quality jpeg. It'll end up being smaller file size, too , I believe. Also, I'd split it up into two or three images; the far left being the green whopalah, as a jpeg, and the other one or two being gifs.

(edit) Typos (/edit)

[This message has been edited by twItch^ (edited 27-12-2000).]

RammStein
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: cEll 513, west wing of the ninth plain
Insane since: Dec 2000

posted posted 12-27-2000 21:01

yes I just noticed the typos will work on that

as for the top image on the left that is a scaned in image and though it looks crappy that is the best I could do with it[notice best I could do with it] .. I did save in jpeg and the size was larger .. I thought about saving it in three files but I've always had trouble with the cutting part I seem to lose 2 or 3 pixel width that way .. it baffles me

btw .. can you see that it is a tree in the fog [the image on the left that is]

Slime
Lunatic (VI) Mad Scientist

From: Massachusetts, USA
Insane since: Mar 2000

posted posted 12-27-2000 23:02

I like the page design... as for the image, I thought it was some sort of alien aiming a ray gun to the right, but I can see the tree now, yes. You may want to clarify that image a little more.

Drakkor
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Seatte, Warshington, USA
Insane since: Dec 2000

posted posted 12-28-2000 00:53

Very nice design... and I do have a suggestion... If you can't scan the image again, try reproducing with Bryce.
I had no idea it was supposed to be a tree, I was having flashbacks of Paintball in the fall.
-D

bunchapixels
Neurotic (0) Inmate
Newly admitted
posted posted 12-28-2000 01:43

mmm... nice work.
im looking at it in ns4 and ie5, and there are some large differences.
no problem, of course, but im trying to figure otu which bit i like better.
im in 1024 x 768 res, and in NS some of the text is barely legible.
also, (in NS only) there is "&n" just sitting there in front of the torrelink banner. little too cryptic for me!
the tables look very different, as well as the font size differences (IE is a nice size), teh cell bgcolors are black in Ie, and teh same as teh html body in NS. for the menus, i think black definitely looks better.
for the body, it DOES need some distinction from the background, but maybe just the justified text with its sufficient margin provides enough of a border.
i followed a link (memebrship gains), and in this one, the NS version (that is, havnig a background the same as the html body bgcolor) looks much better, as the IE one looks messy. i think this is because there is no cell padding.
another thing - im thinking that maybe the title could look better if it was the entire body cell width. maybe.
ok, now 'cause your site looks so damned good, its time to really get nitpicking.
this bit:
Conditions of Use ] Copyright © United Realms 2000 [ Privacy Policy
i reckon would look better like this:
Conditions of Use

Maruman
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: down under
Insane since: Oct 2000

posted posted 12-28-2000 09:16

WOW!! thats a great improvement form the last version! COOL i really like it. everything has pretty much already been said. oh you should align the banner for "torrelik" with the rest of the page. or with the copyright. looks werid. every thing seemed to work fine on my browser setup. (ie5 1024/768)

great work!



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