Preserved Topic: some mtb team page (Page 1 of 1)

Long time no see! I haven't been here in a long while so here's some stuff for you to give advices and critics http://koti.mbnet.fi/~powder/joonas2/

-Time is always against me-

opening page is easy on the eyes. i like your choice of colors.
hard to review it as a site as only the one page is working...

I like the design, however there seems to be a lot of empty space at the top.

I see no reason for the splash page ... waste of time to have one IMHO. And the font is hard to read in that graphic. On first look it seems to read downtullracing. Took me a while to figure out what it really said.

Menu link text is just a tad too small. Maybe bump it up a size.

A line is running vertical down the left side of the content block right through your text.

And there is a ton of blank space at the top of the screen. Looks like a graphic is missing or something.


BeeKay
Murphy's 50 Laws of Combat Operations
14. Never share a foxhole with someone braver than you.
31. If it's stupid and it works, it ain't stupid.

You've definitely created a style, my friend.

However, your style has no substance. Make sense? You're doing something here, you're publishing, and that's good... but there's nothing there. It's catchy...and yet, it doesn't mean anything.

Maybe I'm on a tirade over things having meaning, but there's too much trite shit out there.. I know you're better than that.


s t e p h e n

hey nt

i really like it. clean and simple plus lots of my friends race MTbikes so the subject is cool

that font is really cool, could you send it to me ?
ishak@funnelwebinternet.com.au

thanx!

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Maruman I am the princess of the universe
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hey thanx nt!

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Maruman I am the princess of the universe
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Hey I want to thank everyone for their reply to this threat! It was super helpful folks! I've was thinking today at school what twItch^ said and I realized that I have some problems at my style... I leave too much blank space without content. So I shaked my self like a mad monkey and started working. I think these are going to be the best sites I've ever done and they'll prolly be ready this week so I'll let you guys know when I'm done!

Thanks again!

-Time is always against me-

I made some major updates and there's more to come!


-Time is always against me-