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brainbutter Obsessive-Compulsive (I) Inmate From: Insane since: Nov 2000	posted 04-01-2001 00:00 Hi all, I'm almost done with my very first character animation. It's 1 min 40 sec long and was created entirely by me in 5 months. The only thing I have left is the facial animation and some tweaking. I would really apreciate any comments that you all might have on how to improve it. I'm hoping to get a job in the CG industry with this (hint hint ). I have it in several file formats: www.brainbutter3d.com/xfer/origami.avi 200x148 normal avi, 2 megs www.brainbutter3d.com/xfer/origami.exe 320x240 self playing BINK video file, 6 megs www.brainbutter3d.com/xfer/origamidivx.avi 320x240 divx avi, 3.7 megs Thanks!
kretsminky Maniac (V) Inmate From: A little lower... lower... ahhhhhh, thats the spot Insane since: Jun 2000	posted 04-01-2001 00:05 That was great! Facial animations will add a ton to it. Very nice! That blue one has boobies!
GRUMBLE Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist From: Omicron Persei 8 Insane since: Oct 2000	posted 04-01-2001 10:31 the animation is awesome! nothing to improve for me! great! the story is a bit... ...strange?
kromaZ Bipolar (III) Inmate From: Adanac Insane since: Oct 2000	posted 04-01-2001 16:03 Totally cool...especially liked the piece of paper that was kicked and went flying. Touches like that and the really smooth motions plus the subtle natural body gestures make it all work seamlessly. Great work...and good luck in job hunt.
Das Maniac (V) Inmate From: Houston(ish) Texas Insane since: Jul 2000	posted 04-02-2001 16:48 Very nice. With that on your demo reel, you shouldn't have any problems getting a job in the field I like the punch line, too
Skaarjj Maniac (V) Mad Scientist From: :morF Insane since: May 2000	posted 04-03-2001 01:43 Yeah...but there's a problem with that origami book. When he has it open, and his hand is moving it, it doesn't move quite the same as his hand. It'll just take some tweaking of the animation paths to fix that. Beyond that...Cool! Don't know what else to say Computer Senility. I had a friend once who had it. His name was Gilbert, but he prefered it if people called him 'Ramases Niblick the third...Kerplunk, Kerplunk, Whoops! Wheres my thribble?'... - Kryton, Red Dwarf.

Preserved Topic: please critique my new animation!\$

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brainbutter
Obsessive-Compulsive (I) Inmate

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Insane since: Nov 2000

posted 04-01-2001 00:00

Hi all, I'm almost done with my very first character animation. It's 1 min 40 sec long and was created entirely by me in 5 months. The only thing I have left is the facial animation and some tweaking. I would really apreciate any comments that you all might have on how to improve it. I'm hoping to get a job in the CG industry with this (hint hint ).

I have it in several file formats:
www.brainbutter3d.com/xfer/origami.avi
200x148 normal avi, 2 megs
www.brainbutter3d.com/xfer/origami.exe
320x240 self playing BINK video file, 6 megs
www.brainbutter3d.com/xfer/origamidivx.avi
320x240 divx avi, 3.7 megs

Thanks!

kretsminky
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: A little lower... lower... ahhhhhh, thats the spot
Insane since: Jun 2000

posted 04-01-2001 00:05

That was great! Facial animations will add a ton to it.

Very nice!

That blue one has boobies!

GRUMBLE
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist

From: Omicron Persei 8
Insane since: Oct 2000

posted 04-01-2001 10:31

the animation is awesome! nothing to improve for me! great!
the story is a bit... ...strange?

kromaZ
Bipolar (III) Inmate

From: Adanac
Insane since: Oct 2000

posted 04-01-2001 16:03

Totally cool...especially liked the piece of paper that was
kicked and went flying.

Touches like that and the really smooth motions plus the subtle natural
body gestures make it all work seamlessly.

Great work...and good luck in job hunt.

Das
Maniac (V) Inmate

From: Houston(ish) Texas
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted 04-02-2001 16:48

Very nice. With that on your demo reel, you shouldn't have any problems getting a job in the field

I like the punch line, too

Skaarjj
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: :morF
Insane since: May 2000

posted 04-03-2001 01:43

Yeah...but there's a problem with that origami book. When he has it open, and his hand is moving it, it doesn't move quite the same as his hand. It'll just take some tweaking of the animation paths to fix that.

Beyond that...Cool! Don't know what else to say

Computer Senility. I had a friend once who had it. His name was Gilbert, but he prefered it if people called him 'Ramases Niblick the third...Kerplunk, Kerplunk, Whoops! Wheres my thribble?'... - Kryton, Red Dwarf.