Topic awaiting preservation: something I've been working on (Page 1 of 1)

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c&c appreciated




...Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most (ozzy osbourne)

SWEEEEEEET!!!

Deep man really deep! Just one question, is that Sigmund Frued in the Ball?

Here lie the remains of Templar654's sig... *sniff*
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thats MC Escher, and his work as well. Are the frightened people your creation or are they copy and pasted as well?

Not sure what youre trying to do here but I suspect none of its of your own hand and even the composition isn't really appealing so... c&c #1 for you there

whats the point of it?

edit: daggum shift and p key ain't workin



(Edited by JKMabry on 09-25-2004 18:42)

Weak.

As for C&C, i've seen better copy and pastings. The blur doesn't help your pixelation problem. A problem you wouldn't have if your source images werent different sizes, or your own.

What is that thing top centre ?

You probably would have gotten us if you had posted just the picture of the frightened faces, how on earth did you think we wouldn't recognise Escher and one of his more famous ones at that, with his own fuckin head in it!

Advice: Stop working on it.

Edit: Original Escher for anyone curious.

oh and http://www.postfun.com/pfp/features/98/feb/faces.html

(Edited by Hugh on 09-26-2004 01:57)

I have to echo JK and Hugh here...

A very sloppy slapping together of other people's artwork over a garish gradient, with some random blurry thing that might be......a lamp? in the middle of it.

All the blurs and pixelation knock down a few more notches...

I guess I'm left more confused than anything.

FWIW

This just has me baffled. I don't see it saying that it's your own work, so I don't know whether you were trying to take credit for the Escher woodcut or not, but even as a composition of a bunch of cut and pasted imagery, it's just... I'm sorry, it's terrible. You can see a swatch of color through the cropped Escher bit, suggesting that you accidentally erased there, or when you were cropping it, you missed a spot. The lamp (I think) hanging down is blurred beyond recognition, and it's not even fully in the composition, that's just messy. The only thing that it looks like you had any involvement in creating is the "frame" of the painting, and again, the edges of the painting are so blurred, it doesn't look so much set in the frame as just ... I can't even describe what it looks like. It looks like nothing. It looks like just a terrible cut and paste job. Beyond the gradiant and possibly the frame of the painting, I see nothing that I would attribute to your own hand. If you made the frame and were showing it off by cutting and pasting some other artwork in, well, that'd be at least a little understandable... except you have made it so the frame is barely visible.

I'm not sure where you were trying to go with this image, but I'd suggest that you put more of your own work into it before showing it again. You won't find many positive critiques with what you've got now.

ask and ye shall receive!

maybe I should try harder?

yeah, I should!

//runs back to the lab




...Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most (ozzy osbourne)