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Sloloem
Bipolar (III) Mad Scientist

From: Camillus, NY, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 09-11-2000 22:01

I was messing around with 3D transform...and saw that if I made a spherical selection and rotated it the other side looked like a golf ball...so I put this together...I know the grass is really fakelooking...but I wasn't trying for good looking grass.


twItch^
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: the west wing
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 09-11-2000 22:34

God...I hope you don't want me to comment on that.

Sloloem
Bipolar (III) Mad Scientist

From: Camillus, NY, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 09-11-2000 22:36

Actually, I do.
Rip apart, man!

Nevex
Paranoid (IV) Inmate

From: East Ward, Asylum
Insane since: May 2000

posted posted 09-11-2000 22:51

To much snot green there -rip-.The golfball could of been done easily in kpt3 without going through the trouble of using the 3d plugin. the fours has a weird blur on it I can explain why you did that one. -rip-

-rip--rip--rip--rip--rip--rip--ripppppppppppp-hehe

At least you try man.

mbridge
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist

From:
Insane since: Jun 2000

posted posted 09-11-2000 23:59

Four is spelled fore. rofl

Sloloem
Bipolar (III) Mad Scientist

From: Camillus, NY, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 09-12-2000 00:09

D'oh.

eyezaer
Lunatic (VI) Mad Scientist

From: the Psychiatric Ward
Insane since: Sep 2000

posted posted 09-12-2000 02:56

Its to bright!!


simplicity in perfeciton

Sloloem
Bipolar (III) Mad Scientist

From: Camillus, NY, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 09-12-2000 03:09

I shall hurt you.

Sloloem
Bipolar (III) Mad Scientist

From: Camillus, NY, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 09-12-2000 03:11

Oh, and nevex...it's not a plugin...it's right in photoshop...look in the render section of the filters, I think it's the 1st one listed

eyezaer
Lunatic (VI) Mad Scientist

From: the Psychiatric Ward
Insane since: Sep 2000

posted posted 09-12-2000 03:18

seriously though, the detail in the ball is lost because it is so... white... the edges look like a good golf ball though.

Is ther ANY good use for the 3D transform though????? becides a golf ball?


simplicity in perfeciton

Sloloem
Bipolar (III) Mad Scientist

From: Camillus, NY, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 09-12-2000 03:19

really cheasey looking cups of water?...I actually saw a tutorial for that...heh

eyezaer
Lunatic (VI) Mad Scientist

From: the Psychiatric Ward
Insane since: Sep 2000

posted posted 09-12-2000 03:24

that would be....ah...Sad... disturbing... to defile Doc's pages with a tut. like that..... I know it can make spheres and cylinders.. but what good is that?


simplicity in perfeciton

Sloloem
Bipolar (III) Mad Scientist

From: Camillus, NY, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 09-12-2000 03:26

I dunno...I suppose you could slap a blur of some sort to get a rendered look to something...

netmosis
Neurotic (0) Inmate
Newly admitted
posted posted 09-12-2000 04:13

I made an exloding mug once with the 3D transform and radial blur, gotta find that pic...

www: www.netmosis.com

Weadah
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: TipToToe
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 09-12-2000 15:46

3D in a 2D programme. I like it.
Mow the grass.

Spray it with something.



<smiley> </smiley> Weadah

WarMage
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Rochester, New York, USA
Insane since: May 2000

posted posted 09-12-2000 16:35

The ball needs to through a shadow, I also recommend not blurring the word. Keep it crisp.

Sloloem
Bipolar (III) Mad Scientist

From: Camillus, NY, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 09-12-2000 21:58

I never blurred it, the word is really just the same double gradient thing I did with my sig, but I fiddled with the contrast on it.

Jestah
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: Long Island, NY
Insane since: Jun 2000

posted posted 09-13-2000 04:36

Besides the obvious that its so bright you need to wear sunglasses to view and you spelt fore wrong :::hehe::: sorry its funny, it looks pretty good. The grass doesnt look bad.

twItch^
Maniac (V) Mad Scientist

From: the west wing
Insane since: Aug 2000

posted posted 09-13-2000 06:04

Well....*sigh* Here we go, Sloloem.

  • The green is too vibrant. I know you said the grass is fakelooking, but it is difficult to critique something when we're supposed to ignore the background...especially a background that makes my retinas burn.
  • The 'golf ball' itself is not a golf ball. it's a circle with some irregular shading on the edges. I see that, I don't think golf ball, I think mistake.
  • It's been said before, so I will say again: "Fore!"
  • The motion blur you've done looks nothing like a motion blur. Nothing that vibrantly white creates a black motion blur. I suggest using copies of the actual ball and fade them out and tweak them accordingly to achieve a motion blur.
  • My high school's colors were green and white. I have a deep-seeded fear of those colors in combination.
  • shudder


Okay, done.

Human Shield
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist

From: Massachusetts, USA
Insane since: Jun 2000

posted posted 09-13-2000 06:38

You might try getting rid of the text and adding a shadow on the grass underneath to indicate that the ball is actually OVER the grass and not just flying by in front of a picture of grass.

Also, the grass appears blurred as if in motion. This would be fine, except it contradicts the motion of the ball.. the blur of the ball is going at an angle while the grass blur is going straight up and down. You may get a more realistic movement effect if you match the two blurs at least.

Finally, it is kinda hard to see the detail of the ball. I think it looks like a golfball, but if you up the contrast a bit, you may get a bit more definition on the ridges.

Good luck, and keep playing with it.

Wes
Paranoid (IV) Mad Scientist

From: Inside THE BOX
Insane since: May 2000

posted posted 09-13-2000 20:21

Just as "four" is "fore," "deep-seeded" is "deep-seated." Sorry, had to do it. <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/smile.gif">


Sloloem
Bipolar (III) Mad Scientist

From: Camillus, NY, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 09-13-2000 22:04

Yeah, my highschool colors are blue and gold...that doesn't mean I'm gonna go running in fear of the Ukranian flag...err maybe I am, I have a deep hatred of all things Ukranian.

Sloloem
Bipolar (III) Mad Scientist

From: Camillus, NY, USA
Insane since: Jul 2000

posted posted 09-13-2000 22:25

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