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im new here (boards) although i happend upon ozones site in 97 i showed ozones site to a relative and he wanted something similar- although i love ozones script ...
he should hook up with a big time company and make software just for interfaces... graphic artists could just create there own images and would use ozones scripts hed make a fortune??? i dont know much about javascripts ect.. i just like makin interfaces (navagation buttuns ect)
http://www.melstudios.com/center.html

thanks-
i left the ozone code in cause i aint like a thief or anything *L

ouch...

my tongue suddenly hurts.

cheers.mikey.milker

mikey, thanks for that enlightening review. how does the blood taste?

remotely resembles your mom...

*shudders*

cheers.mikey.milker

Well I cant help but noticing a similarity between your site and the Doc's. Looks like you just copied his entire code and added your own images. Did you at least leave his name in it? Anyway the images arent horrible although I would question your color scheme. The floating image in the navigation is deffinatly outta place. I would change that. Eh those balls? Get rid of them. They look bad.

not my type of thing really.... one thing I definaltely would try and improve is the text, looks a bit 'raggededy' to me...

I would also check your spelling.. I found a few mispellings also ...

hope that helps!

krypton, did you use antialiased font in your buttons? it looks that way.

personally i don't like green-black color combinations...

cu, tea




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Jestah, he said specifically that he took Doc's code and used his own graphics. He did include Doc's copyright and permission to copy. <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/smile.gif">

Re the graphics: The lines making up the column seem a bit too blurry. The upper star has a visible square background. The moving balls show severe jaggies when they pass over the central graphic. The real problem is with the text, though. Very very jaggy. Anti-alias it.
I like the wireframe concept, and the middle cloud-like thing, but I think the page is a bit too busy. Maybe remove some of the little space-theme graphics?

i can see we really have some petty people at ozones *L ill overlook them showing me their pimply hineys...

tea -wut is anti antialiased ill make sure i dont in the future....

...yeahP DAS i did dint I ( what milky lickers these 2 are --mikey and analog *L

i got the graphic-ups ...

actually jestaH i wish i did read-up on java and html but us babbling bums have other jobs like inking comics pleasin our ladies ect that sort of thing..NO but seriously i tried takin those horrid back and forth things out but then the menu code doesnt work- also i hate that colum myself i hate the fact he wanted this - hes young though i wanted a more corporate look this page does nothing to advance any portfolio in web graphics -
(leaves singin -- they call me slim shadyyyyyy i wont be back.... i wont.-

[This message has been edited by Krypton (edited 22-09-2000).]

What is anti-aliased? Dude get out of here, you arent no artist if you dont know what it means. Second of all your site looks like you took a good image and surrounded it by not so good images. I apologize if this sounds harsh but I dont get people like you at all.



[This message has been edited by Nevex (edited 23-09-2000).]

Well, Nevex....that was an openly naive thing to say. What the hell are we doing here if we're not going to help people? That being said, what in gods name are *you* doing here if you're not only unwilling to help people out, but you're also unwilling to offer *constructive criticism* on something that clearly needs help.

Oops my fault entirely. I saw the text below thanks and naturally assumed it was a quote. Guess I was just used to everyones quotes being there. Sorry.

Well I dont see where Krypton claims to be an artest but he might, I dont really read other posts besides the last two or so and the first but I deffinatly see the post where Nevex obviously pointed out what a penis he is (see 2 posts above) <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/biggrin.gif"> Not everyones the superior graphic designer you are. You hafta remember that no one in this forum has the talent you do (whew thank God <img border=0 align=absmiddle src="http://www.ozones.com/forum/biggrin.gif"> Anyway if your going to comment on his design go nuts and comment. Please stop critisize everyone for not being up to your standards. I appologized for my mistake, I failed to read his post entirely. Appologize and quit being a dildo.

[This message has been edited by Jestah (edited 23-09-2000).]

Sorry if that seemed harsh to anyone but eh who cares deal with it

god... you people are such sissies.

if someone posted a picture of poop on here and i made fun of it, i'd almost expect that half of you would get on my case and tell me to only offer constructive criticisms.

so here's my constructive criticism for that web page...

you have one amazingly great component on your web page... and that's the code you grabbed from doc.

the rest sucks and should be redone.

there, i said one nice thing and one bad thing.. is that constructive enough?

cheers.mikey.milker

um... the little blue thing in the center is nice.... um... ok...




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